Reviews for Lies
Saxzer chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
WAAA!Why did Riku DIE? MY GOODNESS...

what a sad story.. HUHUHU...

TTTT
ChaosGarden chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
my heart feels like it's breaking *sobs* beautifully written. your message has gotten across. thank you *cries harder*
Monster Mads chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
im glad you wrote in that message. amazingly written, ive never thought of cloud as soras big brother, but i do now! thats an amazing way to use fanfics to help out in the world. Great job.
yelnatspines chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
That's so sad. Those poor kids. It makes you really want to do something! I feel so useless sometimes! I wish I could help people in trouble! I wish I could do something! *sighs* I suppose it's something out of my power, if I ever see it I'll do something, but all we can do for now is tell others about this stuff and pray those kids'll get a better life.
KingdomsCore chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
I loved this story so much, it made me cry. It reminds me of my big brother...well he was not my big brother by blood but we where really close. He all ways looked out for me, I always knew he had ben geting bruises and such. But I never knew why, I was really young and did not under stand. One day he did not show up at my house, like he normaly did. And he did not show up for a month afterward. One day I got fed up and walked over to his house witch was not that far away. He had told me never to go over there, but hay, I was a 8 year old with a mission. So I got over there and I saw all these police cars out side, and a ambulance. I went up to a police man and ask what was wrong, then I learned the truth. My big brother was dead, and all because his parents locked him in a closet, and left him there to starve to death. That was 8 years ago, and I still miss him a lot. But Lynn would not want me to be sad, even if I was for 4 year afterwards. I am glad he got to live for the 17 years of his life he got to live. But I do wish he did not have to live with the parents he had. I am aproching the same age he was when he died, and I am going to spend at lot of time at his grave on my birthday. I just want to thank you, this story really touched my heart and I know Lynn would have liked it.
Inflamore chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
AWW! -sobs- That was so sad, yet so sweet! You can't not like the little kid stories of Sora and Riku. Very heartwarming, yet heartwrenching at the same time. It's awful how some parents can abuse their own flesh and blood. They should burn in hell for all eternity for that.

Anyway, very good story, and it really shows what can happen if abuse is not stopped.

Aiko-Chan SoT
Angel K.D chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Hey, this fic is incredible, not only because of the way it was written, but also because you put yourself out there and spoke about a subject that is sometimes considered taboo. A lot of the time, silence is what kills-everyone is so afraid to speak outloud about what is going on or how to prevent it. I respect you for that, and please keep up the great work. If more people speak out like you than it could educate and save. Thank you for this, peace!
the-beginning-of-the-end chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
that was so damn sad... good writing
xforalways chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
thats some pretty powerful stuff.
Wifeh chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
Aow

Is it nesicairy to allways make Riku Die

P

But

Yeah

This

Was Amazing

And Sad

And yes

-poutpout-
Radev E. Elocin chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
oh my god...

thats... terrible. that stats not the fic. i love the fic, and i'm listening to the song rite now. but thats really true...

-snif- love the way you write. hope to see more cheerful things! please?
Spiritwave13 chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
My god.

That was

So incredibly sad.

And you know how I like to joke about most things

and how I like to go on and on about what I liked/what made me laugh

But I can't with this.

Taylor

You've taken my breath away.

This was so heart jerking.