Reviews for You, My Killer
RBDECEPTICON17 chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
Two words: Depression Central.

That was beautiful. Wish i could write such a thing for these two. With a happy ending of course.

10/10 :)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
Wow ...just wow it's so awesome ! Love it !
arctapus chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
how terrible a fate he has. I love starscream for as many reasons and I feel so sad about this. Wonderful, wonderful examination. Thank you.
fefe77777 chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
i feel sorry for star he deserves some love *wails*
Kibble Beast chapter 1 . 6/27/2009

that was so sad :(

there aren't many really ...good and REAL megatron/starscream fanfics out there...

if that makes any sense.

because their relationship is so hard to depict successfully...

but this was fantastic...

so sad and depressing because you know it's going to happen over and over...

could you continue it...? you should!

it's so tragically beautiful...

i think i'm going to find some tissues.
Dendey chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
This is a wonderful story!

I have seldomly read Starscreams character depicted quite as well as you manage it. The turmoil and inner conflict is palpable throughout the lines and that is quite a feast to accomplish!

Thank you tremendously for sharing such art with us!

zerOtodona chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
I can't help, but to read your stories. They maybe old, but they are so good to read. Don't hate me for that people.
quicksilver2402004 chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Aww. That was brilliantly written! Poor Starscream.
SyntheticEuph0ria chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
That was. . . That was. . .

I don't know what that was.

Disturbingly poetic. Heart-wrenchingly beautiful.

I feel as though I should cry, but I'm too caught up in everything that was expressed by that to hold on to any single emotion long enough to manage a tear.
Oxigide chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
For something extremely hard to write, you have captured and depicted this subject with the utmost care. You have written a very well composed story, and I really enjoyed it. You are a very talented writer, and I wish you good luck on your future works.
Ophiaguin chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
Brilliant! This must be the third or fourth time I've read this.

It is easily one of the best Starscream/Megatron fics I've ever read. ;D Much love.
Dalin chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
gone 4 gone chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
Poor little StarScream (cuddles him).
oddstick chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
Oh my god. I can't even imagine how difficult this must have been to write. It's amazing, beautiful, and agonizing all at the same time. I love this as a one shot, but I wouldn't mind seeing a continuation someday since I think Starscream deserves some healthy loving. ...You almost made me cry!
NybCR chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
*lets out a deep breath* That was intense. Only thing I'd like to point out is a slight typo-in the thrid-to-last paragraph, it says "then I am part caring about anything else"-should be "past." And now that that's out of the way...

This is an awesome story, though certainly not one for the faint of heart. And, in a way, it's not really the kind of piece that can be enjoyed; it's simply full of too much pain... but it is a good story, amazingly written. I can feel Starscream's pain and his longing-even understand why he would stay, though I, personally, hopes that he snaps out of it and realizes that it's not worth it-and the situation portrayed is one that is frighteningly true to life.
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