|Reviews for Fearful Eyes|
| Varia Lectio chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
Interesting. The way you've portrayed Seth as a violent con man is intriguing in light of the fact that the show never says what he went to prison for. I like the violent, sociopathic, yet still calm edge you gave him, and it meshes well with how he's portrayed in the show (prison must have mellowed him down, somewhat! ;)) though I can just as easily see him going to prison for a non-violent crime as well.
I also like the idea of Bullets being at least partially Jewish, as well; it's not necessarily canon but is a really nice and believable touch. Bullets thinking he was going to die and saying the Sh’ma Yisroel in his head, as well as freaking out over the loss of his necklace was good, too, and helped humanize the character. Seth's racism was a good touch, too; what a contemptuous little snot-rag!
I can't say you've won me over to the Bullets/Pickles pairing, but I liked this fic and thought it was pretty good! :)