Reviews for Our Last Night Together
Anon1000 chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
OMG , it was so romantic
Dairegh chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Obligatory review! :D
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But seriously, short but sweet as it were, you know?
Heavy Distance chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Whoa that was tooo funny. Loved it tho
"Cmon Yoh, don't you wanna finish as well?"
"Yoh…God…holy…shit"
"Take me Yoh, I'm yours. I want you to do whatever you want to me, I want you to continue" she said blushing furiously.
"Yoh!" she screamed orgasming intensely.
"Its my turn" he said eagerly.

"Wait Yoh! I don't think I'm ready…"
He just rolled his eyes and forced her back down.
"Hey!" she shouted.
"What?" he asked impatiently.
"Can't you just wait a little?" she said.
"I want you badly Anna. Why do I have to wait?"
"Well because I'm a girl after all and—Ahhhhh" she cried out painfully as he penetrated her wet cunt.
"You…bastard, I'm a virgin" she said irately.
"Not anymore" he said smiling his goofy grin.
funny
She glared at him as hard as she could, but found herself unable to concentrate as he began to pump in and out of her.
"God…" she cried.
funny
"Please Yoh I want you in me" she said seductively
"I want your cock in my pussy!" she shouted at him.

This was a perfect story tho
And yoh's a badass
Cool poop chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
With that she left the room aggravated

improper use of the adjective. Subject, order, verb. That sentence suggests that the room is agitated, as opposed being the one in despair.

With that, she aggravatedly left the room.
Gundam-Issac chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
for the love of all that is unholy, you overuse the word "baka" in the first chunk of this story.
samika-37 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
That was seriously breathtaking!
fanfiction.net chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Totaly hot and awesome
Saqee-chan chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
hot story .hehehe

keep posting !
ShamanKingLover3 chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
(Thumbs up) nice nice nice. 3 YohXAnna 4ever! :D
via-love-tyson chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
This was a very awesome story, Although i didn't actually think Yoh would have the balls to act all demanding anyways very good story:)
jinx1995 chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
naughty yoh teasing anna so much
mn4hpoj chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
i wish i was in yoh's position right now
Rober2 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Da~mn! When it gets down to it, Yoh can really turn the tide on Anna! A really pleasurable read here :).
kelerta chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
i really like your story...
kattylin chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
mou, that's sweet... luved it!
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