|Reviews for How to lose a hiccup|
| xxtheoneyoudreamaboutxx chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Firstly, "all is fair in love and war and when you got a hiccup" lol, thats a really cute line. love it.
but, you really could have written this better, it had so much potential! I suggest having more then just the speach? actually discribe what is going on. i haven't read your profile or your other fics, if you have any others, but i think you could be a really good writer if you tried a bit more (not saying your not trying already) so... add something more then speach to your writing! and it would rock. and if you need a Beta, I don't mind. _
but it was funny, i'll give you that. i always love some alec/max crack or otherwise _
| tylee17 chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
hey Lily: just found your oneshot here while browsing through someone else's profile and I think I'm gonna add it to my favs now as it's a fun and sweet little story (:
made me smile - and, well, laugh (:
thanks for the good read
see ya around!
| Dark Roswellian Angel chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
Too cute. So, it wasn't actually the kiss that would scare her but the emotions, right? :)
| J.B. Burge chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
"Everything's fair in love and war and when you got a hiccup.“ Great line. Cute story!
| akka chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
that story was really funny i liked it :-)
| Sweet Cocoa chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
That was a great funny story
| MayraLuz chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
Okay that was really good! Funny!
| MeryKey-7 chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
Loved it! It's so cute and funny.
| Tory494 chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
for a oneshot that was reli good! wow cant wait to see more of your work