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| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 19 . 6/21/2012
Amazing story! Again, I was taking notes.
I see you learned the use of spell check here. Let me show you what the first part of the very first paragraph said. *clears throat*: "I sat in my rom, staring at the ring on my left hand, twisting and turning it so that I caught the morning light and faintly relfected it." … … well... no offense, but great start... Actually, for the first many chapters I noticed spelling mistakes. I also noticed that you hadn't yet learned the spelling of Carlisle.
Did this story take place after BD? If so, what about Renesmee?
In chapters 3/4, I think Rosalie and Jasper show up too close to each other. You could make rose show up, and then they start to plan for finding the rest of the family and then Bella goes to get Jasper.
In chapter 11, does Bella get Jacob's memories? it doesn't really say for sure that she does. By the way, I like the different powers. Wasn't she able to block them off from other people before though?
When they go to get the rest of the family, it seems like it's almost too easy to do. Wouldn't the wolves at least put up a bit of a fight? wouldn't they be too late to get to someone in their current location? I know this was your first fic, so I'm trying to go easier and be understanding.
Ok now... I really an sorry for this one... It's about the A/N in chapter 14... I'm sorry because I know it couldn't have been fun to be sick, but one part of it was extremely funny. Orange socks with ghosts on them? complete witha hole in the toe? When I read that, I was like "Omg ROFL!"
I think the climax for this story could have ... well it wouldn't be nice to say existed, so it could have been a bit more... climaxy. It all just seemed too easy.
About the story in chapter 18, that is soooo funny!
The only thing I have to say about the Epilogue is, "ohhhhhhhhh!"
Well, I think that's about it.
Keep up the great work! :) :)
| Bitches-Love-Canons chapter 19 . 3/28/2012
Awsome story! loved it!
| HighQualityTrash chapter 19 . 8/17/2011
:) its amazing!
| MarveyTibbsMcGarrettWilliams chapter 19 . 6/20/2010
i luv it~!
| twihard104 chapter 7 . 6/14/2010
so let me get this straight? the pack was keeping the cullens hostage? how did they manage that? and is Edward for real dead, or is he just missing?
| Hufflepuff-DragonRider chapter 19 . 5/16/2010
OMG! i LOVED this story! It was AMAZINGLY AWESOME!
| Fangirl1313 chapter 8 . 5/16/2010
I don't beleive Edward is...you know. But, I really find it hard to beleive that there is a puppy look to put Alice to shame. Love the story. And yes you are forgiven. Sorta LOVE THE STORY! (had to put it in cause I'm reveiwing)
| mountainhunt44 chapter 19 . 12/18/2009
wonderful story loved it bunches
| Deleted53926 chapter 19 . 12/17/2009
| TwiguysObsessed chapter 19 . 10/11/2009
LO lovely story.
| Fleur24 chapter 19 . 9/8/2009
AWESOME STORY! its nice how everyone is paired up. I like how The Volturi came to Alec and Kara's wedding!
| Fleur24 chapter 18 . 9/8/2009
Yea Bella and Edward are back together again! I loved how Alec decided to stay in Forks with Kara. I also really like the story of Dax’s horse of a different color!
| Fleur24 chapter 16 . 9/8/2009
awe! Execpt for the stupid pack , it was a lovely chapter!
| Fleur24 chapter 14 . 9/8/2009
I absolutely love the whole part about the codenames!
| Fleur24 chapter 13 . 9/8/2009
Awesome story! I really can't wait to see how Bella gets Edward back!