|Reviews for Frist everything|
| Dolly chapter 2 . 3/3/2010
I know that it's been so long since you've uploaded this fan fiction, but you really need to go back through this story, and fix the spelling mistakes because they are terrible. Or, ask a beta to go through it for you. It will make the story a lot more enjoyable to read, and easier, too. And you should describe the relationship between Yuuki and the made up characters, your story will be a lot better then. Good luck with future fan fics.
| Refrigerator-Burn chapter 3 . 8/11/2008
also a wonderful story. actually update! lots of eternal vampire love though!
| Litte miss Summer Witch chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Man its good..
| The Demon Heartattack chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
yoo cen rally spll god. ((you can really spell good)) *sarcasm* if you could type a little slower and fix the spelling errors then you might have my interest. in your next page/chapter plz explain the people and their relations to her. PLZ? i will reveiw your story next time. i hope it will grab my attention better than this one. Goodluck and hope you get FLAMED (only by me)