Reviews for Her Betrayal
Autumn chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
ehhh. I kinda liked it, it was missing the detail
MiriFlower27 chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
wow i really liked this. and it explains why harry doesnt have any grandparents! :)
Polly chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
This is an amazing story! I love what you did, but i am still waiting for that story that has lily and snape arguing about lily's relationship with james...
TheREALladyofthewest chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
number one! 1 ! LMAAO good job but still 1.
anonynous chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Love the amazing drama & the moment where they kissed
blazingeyes chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
I absolutely adored your writing style. The descriptions, the pace, and the emotions conveyed were amazing. That too, considering that it was from Snape's point of view, I found it truly amazing. :)

Hope to read more fics from you! Good job!

FYI, I totally support JXL, but I like one-sided SXL...kinda. :P

Anyway, good job, again! :D


Zoodles chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
I love this! I have always wanted to read a good L/J snape jealousy fic... I think you should extend it!
omgromance chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
This is one of the best ff I"ve read it a long time GOOD JOB LOVED IT!
TemperedRose chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
i really like how you portray snape. though i'm not particularly fond of snape (since he was really such a git to harry!) i do feel sad for all the things he had to endure.
loveya chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Awwwww! Loved it and very well done.
XXxGonnaRuleTheWorldOneDayxXX chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Just to humor you :)

2. Nice fic! I love the drama.

4. I really liked the moment where they kissed! It's an interesting take of Lily-James

But I really did like this, and the fact that Snape witnessed James and Lily's first kiss was an interesting idea.
11111111111111111111111111 chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I think it's great! Keep up the good work!
TheGhostGuy chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
Nice fic! I love the drama
Stina58 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
I liked it!
RoseRoseRose chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Nice fic! I love how you can relate to Snape. Even though I may not feel bad for him, your writing is done so well, I start to :) I also love the drama and I'm particularly impressed with your writing style. It's great. I really liked the moment where they kissed! It's an interesting take of Lily-James.

-Rose :)
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