Reviews for A Not So Beautiful Day
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
What if I told you you just wrote my and my best friend's story?
Alexis81678 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Athena's phoenix chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
This. This is...
Wah, poor Kagome! You got her emotions across VERY well. Your writing is fantastic.
batman18 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
this story needs to continue! it has so much potential! its not fair that youd end it just like that :'(
Sam0728 chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
I totally agree with,

'Lizzy-Chan-InuYasha-Fan's comment!

Come on, Fluffy is not that stupid, he should have known Kagome loved him!

You should SO write another chapter to this!

I was crying!

Not many sad ending can do that, so for that I commend you!

Oh, Kagome should meet the bride!

But she would be to nice to say anything the chick would ask something like "How long have you known Sess?"

Kagome would answer.

Sess walks away to get the car or something but still in hearing range to hear the demoness ask "How long have you been in love with Sess...

That would be cool!

O.o ...this is the longest comment I've ever made.
CrescentMoon760 chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
AW! poor kagome! why did you make it so sad?
SuketiSakuraBlosom chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
hey its me you lil sis um could like have a sadder ending i mean realy this is why i hate one shots because i ant the story to continue but o'well ttyl

love ya,

Lizzy-Chan-InuYasha-Fan chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
oh my gosh. please tell me ur going to continue this and make sesshomaru see sense. i'm sitting here was such a good story..but so depressing. kagome needs a happy ending. :[ the cruel cruel world. i would be happy for forever if it ended happy.
FaerysWing chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Poor Kagome, that sort of thing sucks really bad. It hurts to do the right thing sometimes.
Rhianna224 chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
damn thats rly sad but i loved it
Phoenix Miko chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
aw well... i hope she gets over the creep...(I sputter colorful curses)
takengoddess chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
mangalovah07 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009

so sad x[...

are you planning on making a sequel for this or no?
Kira-Chu-Alana chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
It's so sad you should add another part where Kagome at least finds herself another man even if she doesn't love him as much or where Sesshomaru realizes he loves Kagome more. Either way it's a good story.
Ruby Piedra chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
that is so sad i hope you can write more to this story contact me at if you are goin' to write more then e-mail me when its done please or tell me or more of your stories
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