Reviews for The Maelstrom of Konoha Book 1
Guest chapter 2 . 4/13
It's just sad how he is still weak AF you got me fucked up if you think I'll read a story where he is still considered the worst in class and can't do the clone justu SMH
kynan99 chapter 1 . 3/20
Guest chapter 11 . 3/11
So this Kiba Hinata thing is annoying, Kiba never like hinata I would like naruto to get hinata as well I mean in the whole series she is the one who truly loves him. Besides the naruto and hinata match up is great no matter what the fucktards say.
ShadowSnake22 chapter 26 . 2/5
Cant wait for book 2
snorlax285 chapter 26 . 1/26
Awesome story, I wish there was more but I'm glad that you wrote so many chapters to read.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 26 . 1/11/2017
well this was interesting can't wait for book 2
YeagerMeister31 chapter 25 . 1/11/2017
well this was interesting can't wait for more wonder what will happen when Naruto returns
YeagerMeister31 chapter 24 . 1/10/2017
well this was interesting all this plotting Hiashi really is the biggest AHOLE IN HISTORY
YeagerMeister31 chapter 23 . 1/10/2017
well i enjoyed this chapter alot it's messed up the Anko parts i mean funny Naruto with his mood swings lol. Wonder what Sasgay is gonna do. Can't wait for what happens next
YeagerMeister31 chapter 22 . 1/9/2017
well this was an interesting chapter can't wait for more in a way it's sad thinking about Hinata but oh well
YeagerMeister31 chapter 21 . 1/9/2017
ino and sakura kissed wow don't remember that this chapter was cool can't wait for more Team Asuma did well which is cool
YeagerMeister31 chapter 20 . 1/9/2017
well this was interesting everyone took quite a beating another mission to wave aye can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 19 . 1/8/2017
well this was interesting so enter Akatsuki cool mission though with 4 ninja's probably Jonin or Chunin class but they died they all did well and nice fatality for Naruto lol can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 18 . 1/6/2017
well this was interesting can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 17 . 1/6/2017
well this was a nice chapter i enjoyed it alot first Naruto sucker punching Kakashi (Thoroughly deserved i might add) i also enjoyed Kakashi's attitude to Sasgay. I enjoyed the little Naruto/Kiba talk it was funny although Kurenai won't like Naruto being close to Hinata but Hinata will so that will be awkward. i loved Tsunade's reaction to Naruto dating Kurenai and Anko eventually it was funny plus her burning reports gotta love that plus the clone drinking her Sake. The mission could be enjoyable. Naruto kind fits the team in a way with his Kage Bunshin's. I wonder what will happen with Hinata. Lastly Sakura I hope she gets strong and hope she eventually trains under Tsunade like normal. Hope she becomes good with Genjutsu. Would be nice if maybe Naruto asks Kurenai to help her but if she would is another thing as she doesn't like Sakura for being a fangirl although not being around him all the time should remedy that situation well maybe who knows
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