Reviews for The Maelstrom of Konoha Book 1
YeagerMeister31 chapter 26 . 1/11
well this was interesting can't wait for book 2
YeagerMeister31 chapter 25 . 1/11
well this was interesting can't wait for more wonder what will happen when Naruto returns
YeagerMeister31 chapter 24 . 1/10
well this was interesting all this plotting Hiashi really is the biggest AHOLE IN HISTORY
YeagerMeister31 chapter 23 . 1/10
well i enjoyed this chapter alot it's messed up the Anko parts i mean funny Naruto with his mood swings lol. Wonder what Sasgay is gonna do. Can't wait for what happens next
YeagerMeister31 chapter 22 . 1/9
well this was an interesting chapter can't wait for more in a way it's sad thinking about Hinata but oh well
YeagerMeister31 chapter 21 . 1/9
ino and sakura kissed wow don't remember that this chapter was cool can't wait for more Team Asuma did well which is cool
YeagerMeister31 chapter 20 . 1/9
well this was interesting everyone took quite a beating another mission to wave aye can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 19 . 1/8
well this was interesting so enter Akatsuki cool mission though with 4 ninja's probably Jonin or Chunin class but they died they all did well and nice fatality for Naruto lol can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 18 . 1/6
well this was interesting can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 17 . 1/6
well this was a nice chapter i enjoyed it alot first Naruto sucker punching Kakashi (Thoroughly deserved i might add) i also enjoyed Kakashi's attitude to Sasgay. I enjoyed the little Naruto/Kiba talk it was funny although Kurenai won't like Naruto being close to Hinata but Hinata will so that will be awkward. i loved Tsunade's reaction to Naruto dating Kurenai and Anko eventually it was funny plus her burning reports gotta love that plus the clone drinking her Sake. The mission could be enjoyable. Naruto kind fits the team in a way with his Kage Bunshin's. I wonder what will happen with Hinata. Lastly Sakura I hope she gets strong and hope she eventually trains under Tsunade like normal. Hope she becomes good with Genjutsu. Would be nice if maybe Naruto asks Kurenai to help her but if she would is another thing as she doesn't like Sakura for being a fangirl although not being around him all the time should remedy that situation well maybe who knows
YeagerMeister31 chapter 16 . 1/5
well i enjoyed this chapter all sorts of drama in this story poor Hinata but i prefer Anko and Kurenai over her anywayz as for Kiba that's a shock Ino and Sakura on the same team that should be entertaining and Sasgay crying because he has to team up with rookies boo hoo NOT suck on that Uchiha scum
YeagerMeister31 chapter 15 . 1/4
well quite an interesting chapter i thought he was stabbed in the chest
YeagerMeister31 chapter 14 . 1/4
well this was interesting Sasgay's gonna betray the village as long as nothing happens to Sakura she's to cool to be ignored
YeagerMeister31 chapter 13 . 1/4
well that was interesting Haku works for Pedo snake how nice for the tart hope Naruto finished what he started and kills the bitch
YeagerMeister31 chapter 12 . 1/4
well this was interesting nice Naruto vs Haku match love the bickering
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