Reviews for The Maelstrom of Konoha Book 1
Animeworld2.0 chapter 7 . 11/3/2024
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Sangteakhiangte chapter 2 . 11/3/2024
Why always idiot naruto,can you atleast make him smart in fanfic
bibink729 chapter 13 . 7/3/2024
good
Mario chapter 7 . 4/22/2024
This chapter was sooo rushed, for example Haku tried to kill Naruto and during the bridge they aren't surprise or at least make some comments or that Naruto used an S Rank Jutsu mixed with Fox chakra and nobody bats an eye. The author is trying to make an "strong Naruto" but in the end he is just sticking to canon actions but worse.
Marco Zilvetti chapter 7 . 4/22/2024
Why Naruto will defend Haku? She tried to kill him on the forest
Jorge chapter 3 . 4/22/2024
I think the only things that Kakashi taught Naruto in the entire story was the tree walking during in Wave and Elemental training in shippuden, but it was Yamato who did most of the job.
FANofNARU chapter 3 . 12/4/2023
this is something which i didn't like about Naruto.
when he findout about kyubi he didn't ask hokage anything about it.
afterall kyubi is part of his existence which was kept hidden from him his whole 12 year life and when he found about it, he didn't question the hokage.
why ...?
Brian West chapter 18 . 9/3/2023
At last! Anko and Kureni have begun to accept that they love Naruto. If only Yugao and Hanna could be there too so we can have all four ice queens love Naruto. I am surprised that Hinata is hostile to Kureni. Normally Hinata would seek to join in the harem but I guess not. I do like Hinata but Anko is the best fit for Naruto. It was nice to see Kakashi owning his mistake concerning the brooder. Now all that’s left is for Sasuke to leave.
Brian West chapter 13 . 9/3/2023
Well I am right about who Haku is working for. I am surprised that Lee is crippled and for once Naruto doesn’t summon Gamabunta. Please keep up the good work.
Brian West chapter 12 . 9/3/2023
Well I am calling it now. Haku is working with Orichimaru probably unwilling. I am getting so tired of people complaining about the age gap between Anko and Naruto. Time for some facts. Naruto is written in Japan. In Japan, the age for consent regarding sex and marriage is thirteen. In our real world couples form up over age gaps greater than ten years, sometimes the gap is greater than twenty but nobody cares. My point is that this happens. Now in Konoha, when someone gets the headband, then you are an adult. Finally let’s remember that the world that Naruto lives in is brutal and violent. Death can come on any mission you take so it makes sense that you jump at any chance for happiness.
Brian West chapter 8 . 9/3/2023
So far I am really hooked on this story. So I clicked on the link for Anko x Naruto and so far it looks like Kureni is going for Naruto too? I hope so. I like all four of the ice queens and was looking for a story that would feature all four ( Anko, Kureni, Hanna, Yugao) falling into love with Naruto and getting married to him. If I am forced to choose only one I would have Anko. I laughed at the pick up lines and really enjoyed the moment. So when will Hanna and Yugao come in? I am curious about Kurama and how he feels about Naruto. I do like the big guy so I was a little surprised by the whole gamemaster thing. So please continue this story.
Vinny K1 chapter 6 . 11/7/2022
""if your reading the story because its Naruto/Anko/Kur, you might want to wait a while, or just not read at all.""
Yeah I should just stop reading this trash and that's what I'm going to do
Should've done this sooner
Vinny K1 chapter 3 . 11/7/2022
Too depressing till now and too boring
Let's see how it goes
corjca1 chapter 1 . 10/21/2021
two of the worst excuse of women i have ever heard off for fuck sake my aunty winnie ward batted men as well as women yet again shes irish lol
Luciendar chapter 2 . 8/9/2021
I figured there must've been a Genjutsu. The fact that Iruka didn't notice it makes him kind of lousy teacher, don't ya think? Honestly, the biggest question is when he could applied it. I checked, you gave him no window that wouldn't have been easily discovered.
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