|Reviews for Forbidden Fruit|
| Claus chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
My brain is working on ideas now... Hrrgh! Got one. In the wilderness of Hoenn a Smeargle is painting a picture of a rare species of apple, until a tropius suddenly eats it all. Then he uses aero/fire blast on it, surprising it. Simple idea, hoping you can improve it.
| goatheart chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
A little bit disturbing but I liked it. Poor One, Two and Three...may their souls rest in peace.