Reviews for Streets of Death
Conrack chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
Very nice work so far; Your writing is fluid and to-the point and I'm impressed at how you seem to merge the old-school and new-school without it turning, well, ridiculous. Castle is kept nicely in-character, he's not quite Ennis' zombie-like atrocity, but he's got enough edge to not be a soft tragic hero.

In particular, the small excerpts from his war-journal fascinate me; the fact that they deal not only his missions and strategy, but also his thoughts and observations, makes him much more human. More of those, please.

I'm not thrilled that jigsaw is in the story, but at least you've managed to turn him from an idiotic whiny goon to someone who might actually pose a challenge to Castle. He's grown some brains and some guts apparently, so if you keep him that way, and avoid the classical Marvel 'For some reason Frank didn't finish Jigsaw so now he will be back to haunt Frank whenever comic-writers get too lazy to think up their own villains'-maneuver and it should all be good. The Spaniard seems cool, though, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you're going with him, even if he turns out just to be cannon-fodder.

BLAKKSTONE chapter 11 . 1/4/2008
This is getting more and more intriguing. A small army of men with some sort of agenda. Plus Jigsaw still being out there...

Very, very intriguing.

The Chief's reaction was unexpected, but the reasoning behind it was smart. Good writing.

Keep it coming.
BLAKKSTONE chapter 10 . 12/28/2007
Well, looks like the JIG is up.

That's what I SAW anyway.

The enemy is beginning to close in on Castle. The pieces of the puzzle are coming together...

Good work of showing how The Punisher is always prepared and covers his tracks.
BLAKKSTONE chapter 9 . 12/18/2007
The menace seems to be getting more and more serious.

Things keep getting more and more interesting.

Carry on.
BLAKKSTONE chapter 8 . 12/8/2007
Great confrontation, nice brutral fight scene. An adversary, a TRUE adversary, not just someone for Castle to squash.

Great chapter, Kevin.

Keep it coming.
tehstripedpajamas chapter 8 . 12/6/2007
BLAKKSTONE chapter 7 . 11/13/2007
Very nice action scenes, Kevin. Solid storytelling, excellent characterization.

I hope you this to the end.

Keep it coming.
tehstripedpajamas chapter 7 . 11/13/2007
beautiful. portrayed Castle perfectly. *gives standing ovation ten minutes*
tehstripedpajamas chapter 6 . 11/6/2007
NICE! love it. too many he's with two male subjects in the fourth to last para. but i figured it out after a few re-reads.
tehstripedpajamas chapter 5 . 11/4/2007
looks great. you captured him perfectly.
Tears of Deathwishxxx chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
Very good start. I am impressed with your story so far.