Reviews for Smother
Pan The Fire Eater chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
You make the best Hidan/Kakuzu shorts. 33

You should consider to try and make a multi-chapter one based off of one of them. :3
Thatz chapter 1 . 11/17/2007

oh god...

I... god I really shouldn't be reading angsty fics.. ;-;

Medicinal Biscuit chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
oh..i liked that. so perfectly Hidan. he's way more twisted than many fics make him out to be. great job captruting that. plus the ending was perfect.
RococoSpade chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
dont delete it. i love this. just post the revision as a secound chap.
Lyricism chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
NO! No rewriting. It was exceptionally prophetic (in a weird kind of way) and fluid in all respects, and you're not allowed to delete it. You can post a revised version of this later, but no deleting this one. Okay?
Diamond Mask chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
You have to rewrite this, because I would LOVE to see a longer version

The last line was especially good: : "They are both sinners of the worst kind and he knows that Kakuzu may never understand, but it is the closest thing to an act of love that Hidan can manage."

That was absolutely beautiful.