|Reviews for Under These Beltane Stars|
| libbyluvs chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
I could believe there was another one. At first I was a little P.O'd. "WHAT SHE'S KILLING OPTIMUS TOO?" That had been my first impression...now...it was great! I love it! I did cry but in the end they got to be together ...so I'm happy. I only shed one tear this go! (im getting better) hehe. Thank you so much
| Lavonya chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
This... is... as... *sniff* good... the... first one... if not better... *sniff*
Still so sad yet still so heartwarming and still so romantic...
I LOVE THIS!
| Ironhide's Girl 103 chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
I'm crying. the story is soo good I'm actually crying :(
| N Harmonic chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
| theboombox chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Why every fic I've read from you makes me cry.. So beautifully written to no end.. Keep going, I love these so much
| Speedstreek360 chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Wow. Just Wow, Cyndi.
You are an amazing writer, did you know that? I have been looking at your fics, long before I joined fanfiction. And this is one of my all-time favorite pairings.
You wrote these two beautifully, and I just loved it so much.
Keep up the good work, you are one your way to being an awesome writer!
| winglessseeker chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
I would love to read this fic, sadly it seems to be wrong file :c
In shadows and Walls were so good I don't even..
I'm sure this fic is as much good, I hope you'll get it here
| Sora4president chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Where'd the fic go? It's just What Makes A Hero!
| Citation-2 chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
I think there is a mistake here. Titles says "Under these beltane stars" but the story inside is "Understated".
I think you uploaded the wrong document...
| XLizardXQueenX chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Beautiful. Amazing. Its so well written, and the story is wonderful. So sad and happy, it makes you cry and smile at the same time.
| Happyfish chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
| Patcher chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I've read Walls, In Shadows and now, this. And yes, I'm guilty of not reviewing for the first two fics. I have no idea how to form coherent thoughts with words (I'm bad with words), so bear with the... not so well-done review.
Your writing style is gorgeous; I've never cried so much reading a fic. You write in such a way that it makes it possible to even entertain the thought that Optimus and Megatron could truly be together. That's my favourite aspect of the three fics. It's reasonable, logical and so twisted that it makes sense.
Then comes the angst. It's so very well-written that it's not difficult to grasp, but still very touching. And touching is an understatement. My hands are still shaking, no kidding.
Half-way through Under These Beltane Stars, you started using present tense. Is there a reason for it? Granted, it gave a very different feeling (in a good way) compared to using past tense, but it doesn't satisfy my curiosity. Please humor me and give me a reason?
All in all, the fics just blasted me right to Primus. Just... wow. I have to admit, I'm not sure if the three related fics are the best I've read, but they definitely left the deepest impression and... I'm not sure what to call it, but I've not felt so satisfied after reading a fic for so long. For that, I owe you a thousand thanks, for making my day, even though all I did after reading was cry.
| Midnight Marquis chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
In the end, all become one.
Thank you for putting this up on .
| i-morgan chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
| Scarlett Spider-Girl chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Jeez freaking christ...your stories always make me cry TT Man, that was sad, but really good. I love the ending, probably one of my fav lines so far. Wow...man...I think I am a sap. Yup, I'm a sap. TT Good stry, love all of you stories .