|Reviews for He Walked As Death|
| FinnimbrunPlacebo chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Wow. That was not only beautifully written, but it was slow and gradual. You revealed the story and Kenshin's place in it slowly and it worked very well in your favor. You're very good at creating any atmosphere you want.
Keep up the good work!
| PraiseDivineMercy chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Interesting fic. At first I thought this was just one of those interludes in which Kenshin angsts, but then to make him literally Death, and to show his good side with the old man, that made it interesting.
Keep writing RK fics.
| Elsieaustin chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Chi, this is incredible. I was reading through, and I had to read each paragraph twice because it was so evocative. There was that same sense that I got listening to Michelle Tumes' cd for the first time; it took me four hours because I kept playing each song over and over before moving on. I took my time with this fic for the same reason.
My favorite part was the description of what it was like for Kenshin to have the numbness fade away and every single memory come back. And...it's fitting. There's a place and a necessity for Death, which is one of the things Kenshin found out when he first became Battousai, but it's so hard to cope with that with one's soul intact. Maybe this practice / penance / duty all rolled into one was what made Kenshin finally fit for Heaven. Oh, I loved the "idiot" at the end, and the way Kaoru was patient in death as well as in life, and, well, the happy ending. *happy sigh*
| ClothDollmaker chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Very interesting . Nicely done. Thank you
| Omochi chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
Wow...I liked that. I can totally see Kenshin in this role, especially after seeing Seisou Hen. Good job! Keep up the good work. I like your writing style!