Jesus Christ. If I thought Harry was insufferable before, it's because hadn't gotten nearly close to this. Seeing him fail to keep his temper in check in vital situations is almost killing me, god, this is hard to read. He should be expelled already and just get done with. Just kill him lol

Has Maeve outsmarted herself?
Another wizard?... Just someone else for Harry to kill.

Have I mentioned that I favorited this?

Thanks for a great story.

Harry needs to read the Evil Overlords handbook...

He talks too much!

ROTFLOL!

Great job with Harry bluffing Umbitch!

Although I agree with Harry, she needs to die!

The sooner the better...

How much damage was done in the books because Dumbles wanted to give Fudge a chance?

It is to bad Meciel does not have a sister, Amanda with a coin would be great!

Framing Malfoy!
It is not done often...
Thanks!

Harry is spoiled and immature, which I think you want to portray him as, but some growth would be nice.
The temper and attitude is understandable, but he needs to learn some self control.

Yes I know this story is complete.

Have you read BRUTAL HARRY it on this site, and my favorite list.

Dumbledore is too good.
He doesn't act, he waits, inaction let's the other side win.

Yes I'm pumping up your review count.

Supposedly the more reviews, the better the story.
I like this one.

And when good submits, Evil wins.

Law!? An evil law is no law at all!

I hope you have written her messy Death.

And I wish I could write half as good as you.

What was Rowling thinking?

What was she drinking?

Personally, I'm Grey.
I have quite a bit of anger and bitterness in me.
But I also have more self control than Harry.

Still if I had been in charge then right after 9/11 both Mecca and Medina would have been hit by nuclear weapons.

Terror?
I'll show them REAL TERROR.

We have about ONE BILLION people who believe that murder gets them into heaven!

They could be ignored before the world became so small and connected.

At the moment good is ignoring them.

I'm not young, with luck I'll be dead before the world burns.

Ah I'm ranting, but thanks for writing.

I almost agree with the saying in a Buffy the vampire Slayer story.
Evil will WIN because good is stupid.

And I am not sure good wins that much in real life.

Terrorists, global warming, unemployment, the list is long...

Where were the White Creeps when Voldemort attacked?

You can be so "good" that you are useless.

I'm told passing gallstones is the closest a man gets to experiencing childbirth.

I like Meciel.
She is ruthless but can be kind to her Host.
A Fallen, seemingly evil, but she doesn't cause random and meaningless death and destruction.

WTF!
White Council?
Save us all from those who "know what is best for everyone".
Oppression in the name of God is still oppression!

How many people have been killed by others in the name of God?

There are reasons I am not a member of any religion.