Reviews for Shinji and Asuka
Jennitime chapter 12 . 12/1/2007
Oh! I love it!
kiosuque chapter 12 . 11/25/2007
Man this is one of the fics I have ever read,and I dont like asuka and shinjis fic that much but you make it for it whit the storry
O.O chapter 12 . 11/25/2007
yiks 4 hours on Yiazmat it took me like 3 hours and 20 somthing min to kill him anyways great chapter and btw wtf was square enix thinking giveing a fucking monster 50112254 hp
nerv chapter 12 . 11/24/2007
gah this is so great, i love it, please update soon! please!
Frau Kaname Langley chapter 12 . 11/24/2007
The last few chapter are very interisting i like it.

Ok Hurry and update
justin chapter 12 . 11/22/2007
loved it! what if u tried something along the line of shinji teasing her and eventually they did some of the things they did before she lost her memory and this leads to her recovering her memories. Just an idea. do with it what u will. byez
azndudex chapter 12 . 11/21/2007
I swear to god if I don't read some smutt coming from Shinji and Auska soon, im going to bash my computer down with my forehead...

Ok so I got that out of my system. Can't wait for an update. P
iamjustanotherguy chapter 12 . 11/21/2007
another great chapter. i only have one question though. why was shinji stammering like a well an adolessont teen for? i mean he's her, got sucked off by her, raped her (by the way i read one review that said she deserved it which is total bullshi.t cause i would like to see anyone go through the shi.t that she went through and come out perfectly normal. sorry for getting off topic.), and i'm not sure but i think he's fingered her in public thats PUBLIC hell the guy's got almost no shame. i know you know what your doing but i for some God awefull reason needed to just about something. the story's great, the chapter was wanderful, i really need to get a job or as the mexicans (not trying to offend anyone i just cant spell hyspanic hey i did it) say a job(yob) well untill your next chapter wait i almost forgot i thought of something for you okay picture this shinji and asuka are walking to school and asuka says something and sets shinji off he grabs her and throws her to the wall and tells her that he cant take it any more he looks deeply into her eyes and tells her he loves her tells her they had a relationship before she lost her memory and then without waitting for her to react he kisses her deeply with the burnnig passion of a thousand white hot suns then rips her clothes off and starts to fuc.k her like never before pounding into her harder and harder pleaseing her over and over untill in her appartment one Doctor Ritsuko Akagi wakes up screamming in her bed wondering what was the hell it was that she ate last night that would cause such vivid and horrible dreams and how could she bottle it and mass produce it and make millions. *pant*pant*pant*heavy pant* dam/nit i almost wish i haden't wrote that cause that took longer than i thought. you can use that as your next chapter opener. feel free to do so. also feel free not to do so. its your call its your story its 12:38 in the morning where i'm sittin' so good mornin' from me. O_o_O


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a quick question have you ever seen the show Family Guy

and if you have have you ever noticed that Peter has a set

of balls where his chin should be? seriously watch the show and

look at his sack-chin.

OUCH GAAH BLAGH (The Bunny kicked me in the balls _
AsukaIkari chapter 12 . 11/21/2007
Interesting fic. Please dont be so cruel and hurry Reply and El amor es para siempre es spanish o español not latín. Latín is another lánguage XD. Espero actualizes pronto el fic
LonewolfBloodstorm chapter 12 . 11/21/2007
i woudent mind reading this retake may i have the site? Your story is also very well done, have you thought about doing a shinja rei, or misato, or mana, or maya ,or hikari, or even all the above? I think if done right, NOT THE HOUMOR way but the right way it could work.
KaiserZr chapter 11 . 11/19/2007
So far good story, I love the twist of having Asuka regress back after losing her memory giving Shinji another chance to have her fall in love with him without having to force her (even though that was pretty funny especially how that got Asuka to fall for him the first place). Plays on the whole "2nd chance theme" that most people like. I like mean Asuka, but is interesting to see her evolution as a nicer girl while keeping a semi tough/arrogant girl image.

Hope you update soon as I can't wait to see how this whole story plays out.
klasnic chapter 11 . 11/13/2007
Great chapter, and Asuka still dont remenber anything although Shinji gave her a deep kiss for "recover" her memories. Update soon please.
justdroppingby chapter 11 . 11/11/2007
great story, I can see you've read Re-Take ;) I've noticed several similarities. Don't feel ashamed it was an incredible manga P
1347039 chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
She had it coming
Darknemo2000 chapter 11 . 11/10/2007
I most definitely enjoyed this chapter. Maybe even more than any other so far.

Good old Asuka is back, maybe she wasn't acting as harsh as she should at times, but again you explained why and it actually worked without loosing her real self.

One note though, you really portrayed her harshness rather well, yet don't forget that she likes to tease Shinji a lot, since she considers him to be "little boy" (though in truth she herself wants that too). Of course, she is confused with changed Shinji, but I think her pride should take the best of her soon enough.

after all her being obedient through the most of the day is a little bit weird.

Maybe in order to see how much spine now Shinji has, she could use that teasing side of her, which left more or less untouched in this chapter. Of course. Though that teasing game might actually backfire her again, as Shinji is different now.

Its nice to see them as a not-couple-yet again. Mostly because Asuka is back to her lively herself (which she was slowly loosing lately).

Description is done well, and I don't actually have anything to crticize much. I can praise more than criticize which is really good.

Almost no sex, but again, as I said, sex was never the strongest part of this fic to begin with.

Overall, a really good chapter. That I really enjoyed. I hope you'll update it soon.
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