Reviews for The Wilderness Is Dangerous
kei chapter 10 . 7/24/2014
its nice story. i would lie to know nii sama reaction
BessieTheNinjaCow chapter 10 . 6/2/2011
"They were so wrong for eachother, yet so right for eachother."

I could say about a million other things to describe IchiRuki,

but that just summed it up.
Hubalaboo chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Your stories capture IchiRuki perfectly. : ) Thank you for some great reads (and laughs)!
zenithoflife chapter 10 . 12/27/2009
great fanfic! totally enjoyed the chemistry between them that felt so natural!

good job!
amehoshi141 chapter 9 . 10/28/2009
Wow!*reads kiss scene again and again*

That was AWESOME
Destiny-of-your-darkness chapter 10 . 10/16/2009
awesome. )

i liked it that you kept rukia in character, most people don't. )

keep it up!
Hatake Tsughi chapter 2 . 5/11/2009
Great chapter. Hilarious, Isshin.

WHAT DO I DO, MY CHILDREN, WHAT DO I DO?”
jazzmin92 chapter 10 . 11/25/2008
Good job !
Fathom-x chapter 10 . 11/13/2008
Interesting ending, a little bit of a disappointment in some areas though.

However, the overall story was very entertaining.

Parts I enjoyed: Satoshi elements, bikini scenes, action sequences, and the fluff.

Keep up the good work,

~Fathom
Fathom-x chapter 9 . 11/13/2008
Like I said, the fluff could have been hotter, but as is was really sweet.

Loved it.

~Fathom
Fathom-x chapter 8 . 11/13/2008
I loved the dialogue and the fluff in this chapter.

The smut writer in me wishes for more though...(sigh)

~Fathom
Fathom-x chapter 7 . 11/13/2008
Good job on the action sequences and the cliffie drama.

~Fathom
Fathom-x chapter 5 . 11/13/2008
Nice mix of action and multi-POV.

Very good.

~Fathom
Fathom-x chapter 4 . 11/13/2008
The introduction of the Satoshis was interesting.

The previous chapters and a bit of the beginning felt a little too random.

Good so far though.

~Fathom
Fathom-x chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
Here's another one I favorited but didn't get around to bookmarking.

It's been so long, I had almost forgotten what this was about.

The plot is pretty cliche, but you handled the humor well so that it wasn't over the top in ridculousness. It still feels schoolish to me though.

~Fathom
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