Reviews for The Hokage Great and Terrible
Popthepuff chapter 11 . 8/25/2010
A little rushed and creepy (couchorochimarushokagecough) but overall pretty good.
Merklin chapter 13 . 6/3/2010
I came by to read this because you mentioned it in another story, "A Few Angry Words," I think.

You mentioned that you think it's one of your best, but one of your least popular.

First, I'd like to say that I enjoyed the story, really. Before, I'd been put off by the length, but I'm glad I gave it a shot.

I don't really see how you can expand on this one without taking the main focus away from Naruto, though focusing on Minato could work, but if you were to expand the story slightly, redo it with more backstory instead of just dropping it in front of the reader, you might get more response. It's a good story, and I think it's got potential for expansion. Even if you don't, though, I like both it AND it's sequel. *Thumbs Up*
JeneyaStorm chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
oo killed off Zabuzza 2

ooo and this is exactly why Orochimaru should never be Hokage
JeneyaStorm chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
naruto-sensei 12 year old Naruto?

ooo Orochimaru Hokage hahahaha well welcome 2 hell

Minato? traitor?
bipocni chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
really good story. i felt it was original and well thought out. it's good to see people branching away from cannon that completely. hope you other work lives up to this excellent standard
Shaat chapter 11 . 10/28/2009
i really enjoyed reading this

i think it's a very interesting story

i haven't read anything like it before

so my compliments

wel done :)
Itachi's apprentice chapter 7 . 10/21/2009
Go Minato! SAVE US! Great work.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 6 . 10/21/2009
Great work. Can Orochimaru really be kill.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 5 . 10/21/2009
He took a deep breath. “An audience with the Hokage.”

No don't do it.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 4 . 10/21/2009
Great work.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 3 . 10/21/2009
Damn! Sarutobi-sama is really strong willed.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 2 . 10/21/2009
Great work.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Holy Crap! with just one chapter read I agree with what you said when you started: A Few Angry Words. This is the best story.
Sebine chapter 11 . 10/7/2009
A good story, I honestly prefer your other storys like

A Mother's Love

A Father's Love

and so forth, but this is a good story too
GreatGoogilyMoogily chapter 13 . 10/3/2009
Man, I don't think I've read a story by you that I didn't love, and this one is no exception to that rule.
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