|Reviews for The Hokage Great and Terrible|
| anemix chapter 2 . 9/4/2009
You really like writing sad and depressing stories, don't you. Once the idea popped into my head of writing a story where Orochimaru became the Hokage, but never got around to writing it, or even further planning it out. I could have never done it the justice you have. I don't have the stomach to read a story this realistically depressing, let alone write one this thought out.
Though masterfully written, I just can't handle such depressing stories. It does a huge number on my psych, though I do not suffer from depression, just to make that clear. I'm sorry I can't seem to be one of your audience. I'll still favorite your profile though because of your talent.
I consider you one of the most talented authors of tragedy and horror I have ever read stories written by, though I admit I am not experienced in that genre. You are also great with detail and (not so) obscure side references to canon. Keep writing.
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| Legate Dana Scipio chapter 12 . 8/23/2009
Touching and incredible story. It definitely teaches the lesson, "Power Corrupts; absolute power corrupts absolutely."
A wee bit on the short side but, the pace is quick and easy to follow. The story probably would have been extremely grim if it had gone any longer. I will definitely read the sequel!
| Rowie94 chapter 13 . 8/15/2009
| Zaxara chapter 13 . 8/14/2009
Great story, time to read the sequel! :D
| midnightstar618 chapter 11 . 7/30/2009
omgomgomg that was awsome!:I
| Outlaw Gene chapter 11 . 6/26/2009
I must say that it is rather disappointing that this story isn't more popular. I thought it was a fantastic story. One of the better ones I've had the pleasure of reading.
| mooglestookmyheart chapter 12 . 6/17/2009
one of the best stories you have ever written.I applaud you.
| KdaAnimefan chapter 2 . 5/26/2009
this is an incredible dark story, considering this is a possible alternate reality i guess you have done a good job
| Alyondria chapter 11 . 5/5/2009
I think this is one of the most original well thought out pieces I've ever read in the Naruto fanfiction section. I probably would never had read it at all if not for the fact you wrote on how you thought your best work was barely recognized at the begining of a story from the romance section.
I rarely read stories from the other sections and wanted to see what you thought was good. I haven't read your story about Naruto's mother which you said got much better reviews, but if it is at all as well written as this I'd be honored to, and I will read it today.
You have a gift and I hope one day you use it in original works and I have the opportunity to read it as well. Though now I admit I'll have to go through my history to see what the name of the story I was going to read when I saw your comments, I'm glad I went to it otherwise I wouldn't have had the chance to read this, and it is a truly great story.
| Monkey Ninja Naf S'netog chapter 8 . 4/19/2009
Well, bye bye Sarutobi. Hello Minato.
Naruto is about to do something BEYOND stupid, but it may help Minato do what needs to be done.
| Monkey Ninja Naf S'netog chapter 7 . 4/19/2009
Interesting little offer. I wonder how Sarutobi can make Minato change his mind and betray his village? I would think Minata would rather commit suicide...
| Monkey Ninja Naf S'netog chapter 6 . 4/19/2009
Minato is a good man; I'm sorry to see him suffer.
Hm... It seems Orochimaru is taking a leaf out of Pein's book.
| Monkey Ninja Naf S'netog chapter 5 . 4/19/2009
Naruto is treading some dangerous ground, wanting to speak with Orochimaru. Is he out of his mind? Jeez!
| Monkey Ninja Naf S'netog chapter 4 . 4/19/2009
Wow, ninja are becoming even LESS empathetic. I didn't think it was possible.
Tough break for Haku...
| Monkey Ninja Naf S'netog chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
The Kyuubi is NOT happy.
I wonder if Minato feels the same way as Shizune, and if that's why he did not let Orochimaru bring her back.