Reviews for pretence
Kichisaburo chapter 1 . 12/14/2017
Omg please update this! Love ittt
LoveInTheMask chapter 1 . 12/11/2017
I have loved this story when it was published ten years ago. As an adult, it still tugs at my heartstrings. I will never stop loving it. I really really hope that you continue this story. Or find the way you want to end it. I'm just so glad you decided to share it in the first place. Thank you 3 3
Saamon-sama chapter 1 . 12/11/2017
Following on the off-chance that you do continue this... I think this is adorable and that your 2007 self was brilliant in making a supportive and not abusive Sakura!
sasuke is gay chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
this story would be good if instead of fucking sasuke it was different character any other than this sasgay who is not an arrogant gay think that Sasuke was gay, semi-sexual or asexual, because he had better chemistry with Naruto, and then he will never be. For a person who wanted to rebuild his clan, he certainly did not like women. They were under him.
Caaries Laventa chapter 1 . 12/7/2017
Thank thank you, idk what to say, i just really wnat you ro continue this story till the last cjapter, please please please :D
Welcome baaack
Thank you :D
Rroxz chapter 1 . 12/7/2017
I'd really like to see this complete one day but I'm happy there is finally more to it regardless thanks for writing what you have best wishes to you :)
rockyourlove chapter 1 . 6/15/2017
looking for the rest aka 9 parts left to this :)
till then, thank you for writing this! it's an interesting start heh
LaserLightCannon chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
...Damn...It's always "love at first sight"...
embernight9 chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
Oh my gosh that was too funny, poor Hinata. This seems like it's to a good start, it's really cute. Please continue
Lukalukageno chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
One shot?
Please continue:(
Tsukiome chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
Tee hee! I am not a fan girl but I am currently fangirling! Ahhhh! XD
paracuties chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
YES. Lol I love this. SasuHina is the cutest.
classafied chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
D m this is old
A Fan chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
LMFAO! this story is awesome! hahahahahaha!
thumbs up lvl 100000000000000000000000000000000000x...
You seriously need to continue this.. XDD
FlowerPrincessoftheUniverse chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
Waah more, more, more!
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