|Reviews for The Nightmare|
| jmwilliams155 chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
This is amazing! I love heartfelt stuff like this. It is amazing! It makes me actually feel stuff! I love the Twilight series even more when i read your work.
| biggest-twilight-fan chapter 4 . 8/12/2010
Loved it. Very cute. :)
| Melinda the Proud Bookworm chapter 2 . 8/7/2010
It's Brazil...I just can't see Edward telling that to Charlie. That he made the family leave, the Brazil attic and Italy...just a bit too far fetched.
| LoveAlwaysLove chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
THE THING! So Comical.
| caesara chapter 4 . 1/3/2009
wow that was pretty epic! i love that you had charlie's POV i like that. it was great I love Bella/Edward where he comes to her rescue and that is what he did in this! yay! cuteness!
| SacreJambons chapter 4 . 9/19/2008
that was really great, and sweet.
| twinerd chapter 4 . 8/30/2008
Aw, this is so sweet!
| cassandra chapter 2 . 8/20/2008
the volturi is in italy.
| mybirdhouse chapter 4 . 6/9/2008
that was SOO good.
i mean i know you want to hear my thoughts on how you should do this or change that
but honestly i cant really think of anything to comment besides that fact that it was amazing.
i think you should totally continue writing.
| summersgirl2526 chapter 4 . 5/11/2008
| kodakuramac chapter 4 . 5/6/2008
I liked your story! The little things like Edward leaving his car door open and the explanation Edward gave Charlie, I thought that was good!
| mindmundane chapter 4 . 5/2/2008
WOOHOO! thats was EPIC! lol! really sweet though...i love the dramatic sweet romantic stories!
| Sly Roxx chapter 4 . 2/25/2008
Aw, that was so fluffy. Haha, You're good at writing the sweet Bella/Edward moments.
| LeighAnn Brewer chapter 4 . 2/9/2008
aw! this was really well written! so going on my faveorite's list!
| abovetherim chapter 4 . 1/19/2008
You did an awesome job I really enjoyed your story!