|Reviews for After The Fairy Tale Ends|
| Midnightsun7 chapter 21 . 5/2/2010
Hi:) So far I'm only on chapter 21 of your what, 45 chapter story? I would just like to say that After The Fairy Tale Ends is amazing. I was hooked from the first few chapters, when Ichigo described the details of the past few years in such a dark tone that I honestly just wanted to read more. Yes, I am surprised with what you've done with the storyline, but you've definitely done a good job. Oh, and I loved what you revealed at the end of this chapter, that Captain Unohana and Isane are behind 'The Substitute.' Good work!
| Yami-no-Tamashii chapter 45 . 4/27/2010
Oh, this is very interesting. I'll admit when I first read that Ichigo was going to be bald, my brain short-circuited...but then Ukitake came and Ichi grew out his hair, and I relaxed.
A bald Ichigo.../shivers/
Wow, in the beginning Ichigo was all emo and depressed and stuff, and now he sometimes acts like he's on crack. O.o Just saying...not that it isn't funny. Especially the part with Renji and baboons. Maybe Ichigo is slowly cracking from all the pressure.
I can't wait until Soul Society finds out. /evil laugh/ That will be AWESOME! And I miss Grimmy and Nel...T_T
| HevenSentHellBroken chapter 14 . 4/13/2010
"I've never felt such an urge to say oh yeah, by the way... Ban-kai.
Or maybe just crank up the pressure until people start passing out, that one's always fun." Just so you know, I was in Anatomy and Physology reading this instead of listining to my teacher reveiw for the test we have next week (but I did record my teacher so I'm DO study) and I had to put this down because I started laughing aloud. Kudos. MANY kudos.
| HevenSentHellBroken chapter 45 . 4/13/2010
NO! THIS CAN'T BE THE END! NO! This is too good to not have the next chapter up yet. *cries*
Seriously though, amazing fic. Absolutely perfect. I can hear Ichigo talking in my head. Love The Substitue. Love everything. *builds shrine*
| bookenworum chapter 45 . 4/9/2010
I'd say it's utter perfection. Very entertaining. I read all 45 chapters in one day, it kept my attention and I loved how you developed Ichigo's charachter to what he's now, after all he experienced.
I also really like what you did to Yuzu, putting her in the eleventh? That's about the last thing I expected, but it really worked in this story and I admire you for that.
So, good stuff.
Favourited. I hope you'll update this sometime, I can't wait to read further.
| Eques Pirate chapter 45 . 3/21/2010
ha, i love it! i normally don't even read bleach fanfics (fearful of manga spoilers) but i am so glad i kept reading this one! ichigo's character is very well handled, and i am eager to read more. waiting for an update!
| Impstar chapter 45 . 3/16/2010
Awesome story, I love it. There are a few things here and there I disagree with (Yuzu and Karin knowing Bankai already? Come on), but overall this is one of the best fanfics I've seen. Please update soon. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.
| Jigoku no Yami chapter 45 . 3/4/2010
good. Awesome. Brilliant.
| andrewTHATSME chapter 45 . 2/28/2010
i think this story is great, it fabulous and so is your writing/ability. but this story doesnt seem to be going anywere and its like you almost make something happen...and then it gets resolved. i feel like this is the prelude to something great, but so far, thats all its been, a fantastic prelude, amp it up, ya'know have yama-ji die and hitsugaya be new captain commander, have the new espada rise again or do something decicive, be serious, your leavin us high n dry over here
| LLXxD chapter 45 . 2/28/2010
Nice, I love the story :D but if Ichigo could beat Aizen he'd be able to take on more than 5 captains.(I don't know when you started writing this, tho.)
Anyways; keep writing and please update soon :)
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 26 . 2/25/2010
I cannot believe you put Yuzu in the eleventh squad. Ichigo's gonna FREAK.
Loved this chapter, except for the bankais...I'm still reserving some judgement, but I do think that's a bit much.
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 20 . 2/25/2010
Thank you for the warning of the language. I would have been rather upset otherwise. I might have stopped reading. As it stands, I'm still not too happy about it. You were doing just fine without it up until now.
I think I missed something too. Chad and Ichigo were always the best of friends. Even if Chad were upset, I can't even see him holding his own death as Ichigo's fault.
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 18 . 2/25/2010
So I guess they fixed whatever was wrong. The 14th chapter works no. *shrug*
All I have to say here is "ouch". You really like character torture, don't you?
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 6 . 2/24/2010
My only problem in this chapter is the fact that Nemu would probably even think of Mayuri as "-sama". With her just saying the last name, it sounded a lot more bold and maybe even a tad more disrespectful than she would think of it.
I also would have liked to see the plot come in a little earlier. I think you could combine the first and second chapters into one, and the second and third into one as well.
Otherwise, I think your style of highly introspective drabbles (they almost remind me of connected vignettes) fits the story very well.
| Stygian Styx chapter 45 . 2/20/2010