Reviews for After The Fairy Tale Ends
Guest chapter 45 . 9/20/2014
I hate angst. This story is full of angst. I love this story. I hate angst. This story is full of angst. I love this story. I hate angst.

I've been going in circles like that ever since I started reading this story. I can't decide whether I love it more than I hate it, hate it just enough to find the love more intriguing, or love how I hate it. Ughh. Maybe it's because I never read much Bleach angst; I'm just not as used to it as I am Naruto or Potter angst so it still feels new.

It's fun to see all the people who know where Ichigo is or who want to help him interact with each other while trying not to let on that they know and/or want to help. I really want to see Ichigo, Momo, and Toshirou all run in to each other in the hallway one day, especially after that comment Matsumoto made about Momo now adoring Ichigo after he took down Aizen. I also want to see him run into his sisters and learn what happened with them. Or have them run in to Tatsuki and try to break her out of her self destructive spiral. Yuzu, Karin, and Orihime are probably the only ones who could get through to her.

I can't wait to see the next volume of The Substitute: "Tatsuki confronts Sado Kon about his similarities to her old friend The Substitute, only to be brushed off by the detached, mysterious man with the hidden ability and pain filled eyes." Hahaha! That'll be hilarious!

So the core of the 'Is Sado Ichigo' club is actually the friends he collected that first week of school. I wonder how the recent confrontation with Tatsuki will affect their investigation? Too bad none of the members were at the fight club tournaments. I doubt they'd dismiss Zangetsu's bankai as a shikai, green ribbon or no.

My favorite part so far was the bikini shopping and beach episode. "Bikini!" hahahaha!

Keep up the great work!
Winter's Folly chapter 45 . 9/3/2014
Sounds nice. Will it be continued?
Winter's Folly chapter 44 . 9/3/2014
Winter's Folly chapter 43 . 9/3/2014
Wonder what happens next?
Winter's Folly chapter 40 . 9/1/2014
She is aLiVe! Progress.
Winter's Folly chapter 38 . 9/1/2014
Oh boy. Least he isn't manic anymore.
Winter's Folly chapter 27 . 9/1/2014
Oh boy.
Winter's Folly chapter 26 . 9/1/2014
No1s sempai chapter 45 . 7/20/2014
jgkitarel chapter 28 . 7/19/2014
Oh, I think she does have an idea of what she's unleashed. She just doesn't fully understand it yet.
iamnuff chapter 32 . 4/29/2014
ok, this whole "everybody is dead, crazy or hates me" thing is starting to grate.

theres no possible reason that Tatsuki or chad would genuinely turn on Ichigo, it's absurd. I'm trying to overlook that part of the plot to get to the good stuff, but it's seriously straining my disire to continue reading.

also, i meant to mension this before, but I forgot, you really should have built up to aizen more than you did, just having one chapter start of with "oh, BTW, I'm aizen and I'm pretending to the first division vice-captain, lol" came totally out of left field, with no foreshadoing or dramatic build up at all.

at the very least, you could have had a "big reveal" scene where yama gets handed his drink, then it only mentions at the end of the scene that it was really aizen is disguise or something.

drop it at the end of a chapter, use it as a cliffhanger, anything besides opening a chapter cold with "lol, i'm not really dead, i was here all along"
Semblance of Apathy chapter 45 . 3/22/2014
Wow. That was amazing. I can't even begin to describe my awe or how I had to stop a few times in every laughter and guffaw at Ichigo's snarkiness and bitterness. This was very entertaining. I bet you had fun typing this all up. It seems like it to me.

I know it's been over four years since you've last updated but I'm still putting this on my alerts. It's just simply too good to give up on. I hope you pick up on this again one day.

Anyway, thank you again for all this you've left us.
Infernezor chapter 18 . 3/10/2014
Anon chapter 22 . 2/28/2014
"If you do can't kiss better than that Ichigo I won't fix your eye"?

Maybe "If you can't kiss better than that Ichigo, I won't fix your eye"
Anon chapter 17 . 2/28/2014
It would be much less awkward if it was "It wasn't breaking the rules to not go find out"
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