Reviews for Jacob's Fault
alwaysgone chapter 6 . 11/4/2007
OMG that was a great 2 chapters 5 & 6. Poor Bella having to be raped over and over, even if not by force, but one does what one has to do. Maybe since Carlisle has her they will be able to save and keep her. Update soon ! Thanks for the 2 wonderful updates.
Rissohma chapter 6 . 11/4/2007
that was a great chapter.. amazing actually :) i appreciate the early update and thats why im reviewing :):):) im looking forward to the next update and I'll go back and review every single chapter if you update agai today? xD lol xD
sOpHiE123 chapter 6 . 11/4/2007
Yay! That's just another reason why Jacob should die.

Edward should miraculously swoop in and change her into a vampire so she doesn't die, then they should have an angry mob style Jacob killing party! And Jacob should die. Forever. And then everyone will be all happy, and Jacob will be dead!

Yay!
sOpHiE123 chapter 5 . 11/4/2007
NO! EDWARD!

If Bella doesn't get back to Edward in the next two chapters at the most, I will have to kill you. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Just kidding.

But not really.

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!
Enthralled chapter 5 . 11/4/2007
Well...this is interesting.
kissofdeath21 chapter 4 . 11/4/2007
that was very unexpected, please write more!
alwaysgone chapter 4 . 11/1/2007
Well lets see it she has brains enought to notice his reaction and smart enought to use them to leave with update soon!
Little Miss Malevolent chapter 4 . 11/1/2007
HA! i totally caught that! edward was so pissed at jacob, he told bella they would be a happy family to spite jacob! good. i thought bella was thnking about leaving edward and that would have sucked.
ella0minnow0pea chapter 3 . 10/30/2007
wa! this is awful! wha- Jake- *choking, gagging splutters* he wouldn't do that, as much as I hate him! (And I hate him so much...)
alwaysgone chapter 3 . 10/30/2007
OKay that was a good chapter. Will she make it or will Edward ahve to change her? If needed will he make it in time? Update soon!
sOpHiE123 chapter 3 . 10/29/2007
OME! SUSPENSE! -dun,dun,dun-

Update soon! :]
not done baking chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
Hm, this is okay. I really liked how Jake was actually almost sweet about it, "You're going to love this" and then changes to make her his own. That was nice
zombiesohmygosh chapter 2 . 10/28/2007
Stupid Jacob ;P Gr.
sOpHiE123 chapter 2 . 10/28/2007
YAY EDWARD! Update soon!
Carlisle060 chapter 2 . 10/28/2007
but bella has to do an exam weither she likes it or not! but it so...touching...not crying but ..i dont know how to explain it!

i say formidable! UPDATE ASAP! :] :] :]
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