|Reviews for It Wouldn't Be Us!|
| Lance58 chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Nicely done i like how you came up with the plot.. :D please continue writing
| Ginji Tetsuma chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
SUPER DUPER KAWAIIIIIII!
| Nyaro chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Aw. This was cute. :D
I kinda get the impression Shino is a "Haseoli" fangirl in the actual games, etc, so I think you're good. :)
| HaseoHiwatari89 chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
HOLY CRAP I laughed so hard inwardly (was at school so can't do so out loud)while reading this.
Funny, cute and pretty much in character.
Keep it up.
| Haya chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
That was a really nice and entertaining story. I like the way you kept the characters in character and made a reference to the "Story of Kudan" quest (which was one of my favorite Haseoli moments).
Moreover, I could picture Atoli impersonating Haseo and that has made my day.
You did a really nice work!
| Lunar D. Hayase chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Lolololol! I loved it! Your great! I think that you just didnt cap Atoli very well but just imaging Atoli copying Haseo and Haseo saying Atoli's cute just made fall of the chair laughing myself out!
| TheEndOfTomorrow chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Excellent. Simply excellent. There isn't a single thing more to say.
| Ayachan107 chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
that's super duper cute! XD
love the last scene.
| Danst chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
| Oxygen Pirate chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
That was really sweet! haha I love the interaction between the two :3
| TemptressLycoris chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
Kyah! Its so cute! I love HaseoXAtoli! Good Job! _
| Delta Major chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
o.. I love this. Think you did a nice job with haseo's persona. xD I love the end, Atoli aggravates Haseo, but but he still really likes her. _ :P
| xiia chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Wow that was so cute! You're so good at romance. I love all your HaseoAtoli fics.