Reviews for It Wouldn't Be Us!
Lance58 chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Nicely done i like how you came up with the plot.. :D please continue writing
Ginji Tetsuma chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Nyaro chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Aw. This was cute. :D

I kinda get the impression Shino is a "Haseoli" fangirl in the actual games, etc, so I think you're good. :)
HaseoHiwatari89 chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
HOLY CRAP I laughed so hard inwardly (was at school so can't do so out loud)while reading this.

Funny, cute and pretty much in character.

Keep it up.

Haya chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
That was a really nice and entertaining story. I like the way you kept the characters in character and made a reference to the "Story of Kudan" quest (which was one of my favorite Haseoli moments).

Moreover, I could picture Atoli impersonating Haseo and that has made my day.

You did a really nice work!

Lunar D. Hayase chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Lolololol! I loved it! Your great! I think that you just didnt cap Atoli very well but just imaging Atoli copying Haseo and Haseo saying Atoli's cute just made fall of the chair laughing myself out!
TheEndOfTomorrow chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Excellent. Simply excellent. There isn't a single thing more to say.

Ayachan107 chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
that's super duper cute! XD

love the last scene.
Danst chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Oxygen Pirate chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
That was really sweet! haha I love the interaction between the two :3
TemptressLycoris chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
Kyah! Its so cute! I love HaseoXAtoli! Good Job! _
Delta Major chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
o.. I love this. Think you did a nice job with haseo's persona. xD I love the end, Atoli aggravates Haseo, but but he still really likes her. _ :P

Go Hasetoli~!
xiia chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Wow that was so cute! You're so good at romance. I love all your HaseoAtoli fics.