|Reviews for Piece of Heart|
| Colleentj chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
Hehehehe... poor Becky. xD
| Alex Warlorn chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
Here's a cookie for thinking of a common sense question for the game that isn't answered: and at the same time actually keeping the characters IN character rather than bashing one of them or having one character go 'woe is me.'
| Hasuko chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
I'm lazy, but I just couldn't copy and paste my comments here. Once again, yes, I think everyone is very in-character here. I mean, you've even got all Linebeck's nicknames right. XD Tee hee! Frantic Linebeck ish funny! XD It is so sickeningly sweet that WinLi's considerate for Linebeck. *sing-song* Linebeck has a soft spot for his little green parrot! X3
I promised a fave, so here it is! *pokes you to write more*
| an awesome blossom chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Hahaha, I never quite thought of how Linebeck would take to me all of a sudden changing his ship into something recognizable...heh. Cute!
| KJman456 chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Sweet! I always wondered how Linebeck felt about his ship being changed.
You kept his character perfect! Congrats!
| Hourglass of Fantasies chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
I like this story a lot!
Heh, never really thought about how Becky would react to changing his ship... :)
Great job in keeping Becky's personality. :)
| Odd Pudding chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
congrats, i've added you to my community! it's acctualy a shining example of what I like to see.
| P.T. Piranha chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
Calling him WinLink is stupid, especially when even characters refer to him as that.
But other than that, this is a very good story, I think you kept Linebeck in character.
I assume it's called Piece of Heart because changing parts gives you more ship stamina.
| PinkJam chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
Aww this is cute poor Link..
(this is AnimeThorn btw)