Reviews for First Time
Nes28 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
this is so great , I love great written long one shots like yours, I love this Peyton , plus it just like I always imagine and want end of s3, Peyton is leaving ,and then lucas realize what he is missing , and what she means to him , perfect story
Brooke-P-Davis chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Aghh this was so well written and you wrote Peyton's character perfectly. It even made me well up a little especially the part about timing never being in their favor...Gahh story of my love life haha. Anyway I'm a BLer but I'm a sucker for well written LP and I like the couple as long as Brooke's not getting hurt on the show, which is ironic considering this is set at BL's wedding. Anyway this truly was well written, I loved it, you captured Peyton perfectly. Also loved the Nathan/Peyton friendship.
Stunna21 chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
good story and i also read the sequel and loved both of them so update your other stories soon, i really want to read the update for keep holding on its so good.
jordanfan360 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
so TRAGIC! I'm so sad. They're timing was so off...

Her rambling about his future kids made me cry, but his comment made me feel a little better! BITTER-SWEET!
HJS-NS-23 chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
aww this was bittersweet and sad! Great job on it though!
ElaIY chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
I loved it! beautiful and very well written but sad...great job! :)
no account anymore chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
Wowo, so said no such angst...Loved it. your a gret writer
SMBear chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
AW.

Beautiful writing, lots of angst and it may not have had a concrete happy ending but like you worte 'it's always going to be there'
annabananaboo chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
brooke and lucas got married, but lucas still loves peyton.

full of freaking drama...

i love it!

keep it up!

update soon!
Stephy J chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
wow, i was freakin cryin during this story! and that almost never happens! can you be like the best author and leyton fan ever and please make a second chapter to this story, where in the end they get together forever? like, do a 5 year time jump and lucas and brooke are divorced, and jake and peyton are now engaged and lucas has to come to their wedding and he decides to not let the last chance he has to make her his go by so he like puts a plan into action with the rest of the gangs help and then they get together in the end? i would love love love you forever! please! thanks for reading my review girlie and again, AWESOME STORY!
WDE11 chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Love Lifehouse and "First Time'

I could see this happening but are people crazy? If you want to be with someone then you don't marry someone else. In the long run. this will hurt them.

Thanks for the story but don't forget your others!
othstewy chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Great oneshot. It was so well written and the ending was definitely bittersweet. It will always be there. Can't wait for more from you.
ThumperE23 chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Good story.
Leyton-equals-TrueLoveAlways chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
awe that was so sad. u should write a second part with a Lp happy ending. great job to read more
andsomeverses chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
oh. my. goodness. that was beautifully heartbreaking!
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