Reviews for Mild Mannered
deadlykitty chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
If someone is telling you to try and improve off of that, they have porn star standards. I thought that was pretty sweet, and perfectly naughty of Tohru. It was hard to tell if she was teasing him on purpose or if it was all accidental, which was great. I thought you captured the innocent but yearnful Tohru very well. Good job!
Gamerj1998 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
It was pretty good, could've been a bit better in some places, but still pretty good. By the way comparing the beginning of the story to the rest of it, you can kinda tell there is a bit 'influence' going on. *smirk*
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
This was PERFECT! ;) I thought everyone was in really good character. Except for Yuki at the end ... I thought he would probably be a lot more angry with Kyo for taking Tohru. Really brilliant over all, though! :)
Ekko Rayne chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
I liked your story. It was very detailed. The only thing that I can think on you working on is space it out the lines and paragraphs a little better. Everything was so close together it was hard not to read the same line more than once. Aside from that your story was good. I liked the detailed work and because of that you were able to paint a picture for your reader and that's what good writing is all about. You want your readers to see in their minds what their eyes are reading. Keep up the good work.
bubblyimperfection 9 5 chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Awwwwwww that was soooo cuuttee! xDDDDD but to tell ya the truth I would have loved it more if Yuki was more upset and found out that what they did in the kitchen. Haha maybe you should make a sequal or something with Yuki or Shigure (Yuki mostly! ) finding the condom our something when they disposed it! XDDD that woyld make me happy!
StillAlivex3 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
-is speechless-

guh, that was amazing!

add this to the list of things i love about Kyo, lol. He's so freaking sweet when he's not trying to be better then Yuki.

Loved it. 3
Amanda Lynn Ferguson chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Kat chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
I think this was perfect. lol. Totally how they would both act given the situation. Keep up the good work!
it's simply me chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
it's incredible how even in this sort of situation you are able to keep them so PERFECTLY in character! It was outstanding, fully and truly. I'm not usually one to review these kinds of stories, but really, this was brilliant! Sweet as well as passionate, and one of a kind.

Yes, well done.
Thomas's adorable girlfriend chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
ya ... and tohru will always be a goody two shoes... say, where'd does the saying goody two shoes come from? i've heard my friend say it but is it from a book or is itt just an everyday thing you learn?
TsubasaK chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
I thought that this was a great lemon :)

I also hope that you will continue to write more. Great job.
breathlessnightxx chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
loved it! :D ahh, kyo and his dirty thoughts ;]
TwilightandCanadaforever chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Kitsune Tanaka chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
The sex was quite good. Sadly, my first time wasn't anywhere near that romantic, so you win.

P.S. Yuki being snarky is total win.
nikkirose4027 chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
This was good... one of the best lemons I've ever read. Nice job! Tohru is a goody two shoes. Me and my friends always say that. Anyway, awesome job!
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