Reviews for Naruto: The Leaf in the Whirlpool
bugmaster chapter 25 . 11/16/2014
Well...its really good I really,won't to read more ...you just got to upload. Hope you have good days. UPLOAD SOON THOUGHT.
Rosenmaedchen chapter 8 . 4/25/2014
Hey I really like your story... but I have to ask Naruto is a boy in your story, right because nee stands for sister...
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
That was a very cool/ominous/epic/foreshadowing poem, who was it by?

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Nightmare daniell61 chapter 7 . 12/28/2013
Awesome chappy :D

also thats a pretty nice quote :p
Nightmare daniell61 chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
interesting
9foxgrl chapter 25 . 10/3/2013
update sometime pls?
Guest chapter 25 . 5/3/2013
Well think u can post the last to chapters so I mean we can see them please cuz I think u did a good job on every but if I may I think you should have naruto ask hinata if she would like to stay for dinner
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Well I don't know if u will get this but I think its very good so I hope u update it really soon
Olaf74 chapter 25 . 3/14/2013
Please continue it!
Stickkid5 chapter 10 . 1/25/2013
Wait how come he knew te answer to question 7 but his test was blank
But so far I'm loveing your series
Luke Dragneel chapter 5 . 12/27/2012
Your Naruto seems pretty weak, you said he learned other more powerful jutsu than the Kage Bushin, but have not even showed any. Not in the fight with Kakashi, or the Demon brothers. I can understand not beating Kakashi, but the only things he used was the shadow clones, substitution jutsu, and his speed during that fight while fighting the the brothers he didn't do anything but get his ass handed to him. It's sad really
AsoenixKnight chapter 25 . 8/30/2012
Not bad! Hope you come back to this one soon!
XxFlameofDeathxX chapter 25 . 7/10/2012
It's good, but I find that as u read it, the scene randomly changes which can be very confusing. Also u haven't given engough information in certain parts of the story, ie when Narutos fighting neji and uses rasengan, it would have been good to hear bout the reaction of the audience and what they think of this. U just need to write in more detail so us readers get a real feel for each scene.
Secret world chapter 17 . 7/9/2012
loved it so much
Kenka chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
this is the first fanfiction I ever read, I discovered it by freak accident, talk about (nastolga)sp?
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