|Reviews for Heat|
| Super MKatR chapter 2 . 2/11
Yes yes yes, f***ink yes. Finally. That was good. Not very detailed but great and very romantic.
| Lary Reeden chapter 2 . 2/27/2012
By the vision of Quil was much better. Now I will read another fic with his POV.
| Lary Reeden chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
You write very well. But I did not find the lemon too heavy. What was necessary to post separately.
| Bendleshnitz chapter 2 . 12/7/2011
Both chapters are very sweet and romantic :)
| shiftyless chapter 2 . 7/23/2010
so very awesome also written very well
| sdeeeee chapter 2 . 6/29/2010
Wow, this was beautiful. Dear Diary was amazing too... you've done a great job!
| Izzy-Rose chapter 2 . 6/12/2010
this 2-shot is just so cute and amazing and PERFECT!
its not dirty, it plain and simply romantic and beautiful!
i applaud you alice laughs. you are a truely amazing writer.
| moonhoney2 chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
Wonderfully done. Warm, beautiful, romantic. Not too much detail to make it dirty and pornographic. Perfect.
| Aimee Coleman chapter 2 . 2/17/2010
Full of lemony goodness! I just finished one myself, a little more stamier than that, but still lemony. Awesome! Made me jealous of Claire... Although, I like Alec out of all the charictors.
| mialuvtwilight chapter 2 . 10/18/2009
a w it was so sweet and cute, worth the wait!
| Vavita79 chapter 2 . 8/10/2009
| mimi-malfoy chapter 2 . 7/16/2009
Finally Claire & Quil togother, yey. I love it!
| Jewinjuwa chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
I've done a lot of reading this weekend...all your stories. Another great job. Keep up the good work.
| Rachel Rabbitt chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
I read this story once upon a December, years/months ago. Now, going back, it's so much better.
Your writer is positively... beautiful, lucious, delicious. When you write scenes like this, you don't turn it into something disgusting and cheap. You turn it into something poetic and graceful.
You are a fanfic hero. :)
| WriterMerrin chapter 2 . 5/17/2009
Absolutely! I saw this fic rec'ed at one of the communities, then saw the note and read all of "Dear Diary" first, and you were absolutely right that it was better to have experienced all of the longing want with them to make this better. Quite lovely and tasteful. I even sympathize with your author's note because my Hubby is far too shy to even read some of what I've written, and he most certainly doesn't want to know if I've used him as a consultant ;)