Reviews for Heat
not done baking chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
Amazing, as always. c:
Biloxi Girl chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
Oh my... :o)

You did a fantastic job with this chapter! It was all I imagined it to be... not too much, but just perfect. I REALLY hope you'll do a Quil/Claire sequel. This is too wonderful a story to let it die now. You're a great author and I can't wait to read more!
Heartbroken1 chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
What a sweet chapter!

You captured the feelings of a man in love perfectly! FABULOUS!

Thank you!
she is brighter chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
awe. it was good! you rlly did him justice.

Niamh929 chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
I don't know why it seems like you do Quil better than anyone else I've ever read. SO well done! Here's a kudos bar *virtual handoff of Kudos bar circa 1991* I've been saving it ;) hope your shopping went well yesterday!

- B
Spinnerofdreams chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
I'm glad you did Quil's POV. That was very nice!
saphira341 chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
That was wonderful

I'm so glad you wrote it :)
eclipselover chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
thank you that was beautiful
Hidingsorealpeoplecantfindouta chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
that was beautiful! omygod! wow...GREAT jOB!
leechlover2 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
That was very good and very fitting to the story!
pleasekillmeijustwanttodelete chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
RedDawn07 chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Brilliant. This was as amazing as the rest of the story - wonderful.
IrishPirate chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Blood Filled Tears chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
Okay. I never even knew that you put this pause let me send you this amazing review...





[k i'm done with that]

OMG I could seriously feel the heat, the passion, the beauty of the whole scene that played beautifully through my mind.

It was seriously like you make it so real i though i was going to explode from anticipation!

The way you did not rush it, nor did you make it seem as if it was so much more painful than truth was seriously glorious! The way that you made them so real, made them so deeply involved with eachother was like you opened up a new universe for them alone! Beyond the words on just this paper, you could see the whole future of this story play out, and it was a beautiful yet real story all played just from this one act...this one delicious sin that you just so magnificietnly displayed.

I seriously was in tears from the beauty of it alone (I know i've said it a million times but yea...)

Seriously Bravo!

you know how to turn up the heat! That's fer sure!

You know the limits between reality and overexerting the situation and you did it amazingly! While still keeping with reality and a total fantasy story! :D




and just a pleasure to read!

10/10 stars for this one!

An all around amazing event of love capturing the hairline of reality magic and fantasy while still keeping the readers on edge just in such a short amount of time...

oh i need to go get a drink of water...i'm sweating it up here...

Is it hot or just me?



You're well deserving though that's fo sho! :D


P.S.- Do a little dance...make a little love...get down tonight!

that totally popped in my head while reading this! :D
Sh.C chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Huh... umm... I wanted to write a review but instead I think I'm going to go call my boyfriend and invite him over.

That was hot! And so sweet and fitting to the Dear Diary story.


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