Reviews for Heat
Spinnerofdreams chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
I'm glad you did Quil's POV. That was very nice!
saphira341 chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
That was wonderful

I'm so glad you wrote it :)
eclipselover chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
thank you that was beautiful
Hidingsorealpeoplecantfindouta chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
that was beautiful! omygod! wow...GREAT jOB!
leechlover2 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
That was very good and very fitting to the story!
pleasekillmeijustwanttodelete chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
Excellent.
RedDawn07 chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Brilliant. This was as amazing as the rest of the story - wonderful.
IrishPirate chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
awesome.
Blood Filled Tears chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
Okay. I never even knew that you put this up...so pause let me send you this amazing review...

AH!

OMG!

SO AMAZING

AH!

[k i'm done with that]

OMG I could seriously feel the heat, the passion, the beauty of the whole scene that played beautifully through my mind.

It was seriously like you make it so real i though i was going to explode from anticipation!

The way you did not rush it, nor did you make it seem as if it was so much more painful than truth was seriously glorious! The way that you made them so real, made them so deeply involved with eachother was like you opened up a new universe for them alone! Beyond the words on just this paper, you could see the whole future of this story play out, and it was a beautiful yet real story all played just from this one act...this one delicious sin that you just so magnificietnly displayed.

I seriously was in tears from the beauty of it alone (I know i've said it a million times but yea...)

Seriously Bravo!

you know how to turn up the heat! That's fer sure!

You know the limits between reality and overexerting the situation and you did it amazingly! While still keeping with reality and a total fantasy story! :D

Beautiful!

YUMMY!

Delicious!

and just a pleasure to read!

10/10 stars for this one!

An all around amazing event of love capturing the hairline of reality magic and fantasy while still keeping the readers on edge just in such a short amount of time...

oh yes...no i need to go get a drink of water...i'm sweating it up here...

Is it hot or just me?

JK

Well this is officially the most AMAZING LONGEST SUPER FANTASTIC REVIEW EVER!

You're well deserving though that's fo sho! :D

XD

P.S.- Do a little dance...make a little love...get down tonight!

that totally popped in my head while reading this! :D
Sh.C chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Huh... umm... I wanted to write a review but instead I think I'm going to go call my boyfriend and invite him over.

That was hot! And so sweet and fitting to the Dear Diary story.

Awesome!

Sh.C
LoveBria chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
oh that was hot. *sigh* im burning, werewolves...
yayme2012 chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
Sweet...
zrbs chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
How on earth am I EVER supposed to settle for a man who is not a werewolf? and you are good, very good at this...
72345 chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Okay, now I've got to down a cold glass of something make sure the kids are asleep and find my husband. Again, tremendous job. I think I've officially become an "Alice Laughed" junkie.

Thanks a million.
Spinnerofdreams chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
I read this a few days ago but didn't review. Simply amazing how important reviewing becomes once you have posted a story, isn't it? *Fans herself frantically* So very hot, hot, hot! And very sweet, too.
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