|Reviews for Once Upon a Time|
| SparkleMuffin chapter 5 . 7/16/2009
I love how Merry told the children Pippin liked Glorfindel!
| InkLordofthePhantomBattyRevolt chapter 5 . 4/10/2009
I love it keep writing. I think it's so cute how Pip and Mer emblish the story to make them sound good. I love how Elenor(?) is crushing on Strider/Estel/Aragorn. I thought that was sweet. I can't wait to hear you write about Boromir though. For them to
tell that part of their story is going to be dificult for them. If I could give one tip for Boromir's death make Pip and Mer tear up a little I think that it would show the Gamgee kids emotion and emotion's always good. I also love the Rose with explosion humor I thought it was quite funny actually. I love your story keep writing.
| Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 5 . 1/5/2009
I like this story very much. It's funny to hear Pippin's side of the story. I like that you mix the movie and the book. The relationship between Pippin and the children is adorable, especially with the questions and interruptions. Keep writing, this is very good.
| Ogreatrandom chapter 5 . 12/21/2008
I am definitly enjoying the story. I hope that you update soon.
| teeny-weeny-munchkin chapter 2 . 12/21/2008
"yay, cake" says munchkin with mouthful. Uncle Legolas *munchkin giggles*. Aw how sweet. A good idea you've got here, keep going ;)
| hersheygal chapter 4 . 12/12/2007
YAY for long chapter! YAY for Merry coming! YAY for following the book! YAY!
| hersheygal chapter 3 . 12/12/2007
oh so cute! I loved how Pippin imitated Frodo's expression when the Black Riders first came... and how he talked about how he and Merry just FOUND the food. that's funny. Great job! I am loving this story!
| Ranchi Blade chapter 4 . 12/5/2007
nice that a new chapter is up, keep them coming
| MoonIdiot chapter 4 . 12/5/2007
Haha, this was sop funny!
YES, Merry is entering the story! Haha, I love this
| Eowyn White Lady of Rohan chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
Really good! very cute. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Ogreatrandom chapter 4 . 12/4/2007
Great chapter! I was glad to see that you had updated. It'll be nice to see Merry in the story.
| unorthodox yo-yo chapter 4 . 12/4/2007
This is really cute. I can't wait to see how you do Merry.
I think it's cute that the younger Merry thinks Bilbo is a mean person.
| unorthodox yo-yo chapter 3 . 11/28/2007
I like it so far. Pippin is such a stinker. :P
| Meriagrin Baggwise chapter 3 . 11/9/2007
Ahh, chapter three. The children remind me of my young cousins: so demanding and curious (and impatient!) They are very amusing, but so is Pippin; his antics are hilarious, very Pippin-ish. The little interruptions from the children are funny and they kind of make the story...(what's the word?)...fresh, if you know what I mean, I just feel that we know the story and it makes it sort of...stale. I know the whole point of this piece is that he is telling the story to the kiddies from his own point of view rather than third-person, and he does.
The song was a nice bit in there, too. (I love songs, not that that really matters)
| Ogreatrandom chapter 3 . 11/8/2007