Reviews for Blame
Kamp chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
nice fic. i could definitely see river thinking that way.
fragilestrength chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Okay, so I loved this. I didn't get River/Jayne until I watched Serenity and I swear my thought process after watching the movie was basically, 'wah, Wash's dead! WAH. Hmm, River/Jayne WOULD make a good ship... WAH. WASH!' xD

I like your River's voice, catching her in a semi-lucid moment (which most people never think to do) and the very matter-of-fact, childlike way in which she thinks. (This is paralleling your review to me, isn't it? Sorry!)

Also, I love the way she views Jayne's 'betrayl'. This was actually how I originally saw it (...that's alarming...) and tried to explain it to my parents, but they didn't get it. Nice to know that you thought of it this way, and apparently so did River.

Lovely!

-Cayenne
icebreather chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
That's nice. It seems quite in-character, the River-y logic behind that infirmary scene.
DaynaJD chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
Cute. I think you captured River pretty well. _