|Reviews for Center Of My World|
| AlexLeFee chapter 2 . 11/6/2007
| Amarante Akio chapter 2 . 11/3/2007
Well I like how the progress of the story is going, the only thing I could say is that some of the sentences don't flow very well and seems a little weak in spots, like parts that should be serious are kinda said in a joking tone. But I'm happy to report there weren't any major mistakes so kudos to you! ;) Can't wait for next chapter!
| Snoochie chapter 2 . 11/3/2007
great story so far. i like it it shows potential. update soon?
| Midoriko Jewel chapter 2 . 11/3/2007
I can't say I'm not a little bit dissapointed that it's another
"Naraku's-dead-Inuyasha-goes-to-Kikyo-Kagome-gets-the-wrong-idea" story, but it's one of the best I've read!
I agree with one of your other reviewers, that I really hope everryone is more mature, because I've read perfectly good stories that have been ruined because someone wasn't aware of what an annoyance Kagome's bawling and 'sitting' are. Please dont make that mistake! Don't make her a whiny little brat!
| uds3mel chapter 2 . 11/3/2007
I like ur story! write more! PeAcE
| Kagome126 chapter 2 . 11/3/2007
Good chapter please update soon.
| DaynaJD chapter 2 . 11/2/2007
Shippo's right. InuYasha is an idiot. Great chapter. _
| I'm-painting-the-world-gray chapter 2 . 11/2/2007
awesomeness! plez write soon!
| Tempest78 chapter 2 . 11/2/2007
nice chappy YAY! Kikyo was put to rest!:)
| Tempest78 chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
| g2fan chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
Good story. Please update soon. Wendy
| I'm-painting-the-world-gray chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
OMG! it is popp'n like me lipgloss!
| spuffygirl1994 chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
i liked it
| Kagome126 chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
Wow this is so good so far...Please update soon!
| Amarante Akio chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
Well this is off to a very good start and the Kikyo being at rest scene was beautiful. I noticed a few grammar errors and forgotten words in places but other than those small mistakes this story's great so keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter! ;)