I JUST HAVE ONE THING TO SAY. THIS FANFICTION IS 7/6 MONTHS YOUNGER THAN ME. WOW PEOPLE

Great story. You captured them perfectly. Not dragged out at all. Inner conflict was so realistic

that was well written...but a really disappointing diatribe. instead of it being an empowering moment. she sounds more weak

I think Stewart looked more like a vampire than Pattinson when she played human Bella. I couldn't stop laughing when I read that Bella's face was very expressive. Cough...New Moon... Cough...

Shite! I have to admit that this was less sappier than the books... I love the new Bella! I always thought she should've put her foot down for more than just giving birth to Renesmee.

Bella is still so stupid

I loved your story! I read Midnight Sun and the nostalgia was so glorious that I immediately pounded back New Moon again then stumbled upon your story! Fantastic job!

Great story, would love to see if a one off of where Bella cannot take Edward back and where you would take that story line.

Very sweet story! Thanks!

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Holy Sh. . . aving Cream for sure.

How did I miss this one?

good

Bella is acting dumb ok I get that she is different but she is still Bella just a bitter Bella. I hope she pulls her head out of her ass. I don't blame her for treating them like carp the Cullen s deserve it.

I don't think her name fits her. She should go by her name. To me she is trying to convince herself she is not Bella Swan. She is being stupid