Reviews for The Inevitable |
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![]() ![]() I know this was written long ago but I loved it! Bringing them back to Forks again at the same time was genius. I loved every paragraph |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an excellent epilogue! Especially the last line. Perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t think it’s drawn out at all! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit, I went into the story without a lot of faith. The whole premise upsets me that he left her but I am so glad I read it. I absolutely love the story. I love the entire thing. I think he did a great job in making Edward actually work to get Bella back, even though she loved him the whole time. Thank you so much for writing this, and allowing us to read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read it in one sitting. great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Imagine my surprise when I found it was completely rearranged.” LMAO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t think you’re drawing things out There is a lot for them to work through And that takes time Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() He is an idiot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() Really she is an idiot what a way to slap her father in the face. The Swan name not good enough for her now. She is stupid she definitely is disgracing her father by that comment about not being a Swan and to let someone coward dumbass take over who you are is stupid |
![]() ![]() Rosalie the bitch who never cared about Bella of course it is easy for her |
![]() ![]() I don't know why they are acting so upset. No human is promised a tomorrow. There pretty naive when it comes to humans thinking we are all guaranteed to have a full life, and Evey human women can get pregnant and kodd |
![]() ![]() ![]() A proposal? In school? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. Well done. |