Reviews for A Little Red Forked Tongue
MissArcticWolf chapter 1 . 6/1/2019
coruscantbookshelf chapter 1 . 5/20/2015
I could be wrong, but you seem to be insinuating that God Himself was responsible for tempting Eve, and all that that entails. Was this intentional?
Brendan Rizzo chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
And God punishes them anyway...
Sunuxal chapter 1 . 4/7/2008

I like this one, too.

Divine writers Block...! lol

And I like your exegeses why grass can only produce a single note and why the snake has to shed its skin. Great dialog!


Finn Mac Cool chapter 1 . 8/31/2001
I like this approach to the story. You'll probably get a lot of flames from Bible purists, but you should have known that coming in. I think a sequel or another chapter is in order.