Reviews for Cain and Abel
Zenebech chapter 1 . 1/19
I really enjoyed this story, but I'd like to see a fanfiction where Cain doesn't kill Abel and instead cares for him.
VirReturnsFromMinbar chapter 1 . 10/10/2022
Very well written.
MissArcticWolf chapter 1 . 5/31/2019
This is good. I Love stories of the Bible.
Songbird1996 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Good part: Wow, this is a really good take on the motives behind Cain murdering Abel. Many know of the physical killing, but do not realize there really was a cause and a reason why his mind told him to do so, though it was a very evil thing to do.

Could have been better: The only thing I can see that wasn't as good as the rest is you didn't mention the mark on Cain that told others not to kill him. But everything else was good. :)
Vaoni chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
I really like this! Good work
Lionhearted Girl chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Very good, I iked it. The only thing wrong with it is that Eve wasn't a prophet ess so theres no way anyone would have known that would happen.
Sunuxal chapter 1 . 4/7/2008

I like your story very much. :-)

First because of your writing style (Yeah! Someone who has remembered that this here is a FanFICTION-Board – yes, in the bible-section, too) and second because I like stories with a shifted point of view: It challenges people to think about your and then the original message.

In your story it seems clear to me, that Gods acting was cruel and merciless. Now – when there is some pity for Cain and one has lost the typical, simple classification in good and bad – one can start to think how Gods acting was in the original story...


Rose Cotton chapter 1 . 3/31/2003
This is an awesome description of what it might have been like for Cain. You give the reader so much sympathy for him. I love stories that dramatize Bible stories without really losing the original message (or going into ground that could be considered blasphemous). Have you ever read *The Book of God*? It's really good. Your story reminded me of it. Anyway, great job! :-)
Lassiter chapter 1 . 8/31/2001
*boggle* good! wow. last part was very touching.
Finn Mac Cool chapter 1 . 8/30/2001
It's nice to hear the story from Cain's perspective, though not condoning his actions.