Reviews for Dark Wu
Luiz4200 chapter 4 . 11/6/2007
This story is interesting. Please update.
xxFireWarriorxx chapter 3 . 11/3/2007
Okay, the splitting up part was a bit predictable and not very wise on Rai's part (he's Shoku leader, he should know better), but other than it was great! Loved the idea of the maze, and I liked how Kim was turned first. But one question: Why Kim and Omi by themselves, and Clay with Rai? That was kinda weird. Loved it though so continue soon please!

Vampires... gr... so jealous... I wish I came up with the idea first... maybe I'll do a fic on werewolves instead... lol!

xxFireWarriorxx

PS: maybe you should have spent more time on the part when Kim was bitten. Like, added more thought and feeling and put it in her point of view, or something like that. I don't know. I just think you maybe could have added more description, like Kim's horror and fear. Great job though!
xxFireWarriorxx chapter 2 . 11/1/2007
AWESOME CHAPTER! Continue soon plz! omg, I can tell the next chapter's gonna be good...

xxFireWarriorxx

PS: will this fic include RaixKim? Just wondering...
PurpleSkillz chapter 2 . 10/31/2007
This is freaking awesome so yea update soon otay...Peace

-Ukee Chick
xxFireWarriorxx chapter 1 . 10/31/2007
This sounds really interesting! Vampires... I like vampires... haha. Will any of the monks be transformed? Killed? Bitten? RaixKim? Continue soon plz!

xxFireWarriorxx

PS: try to add more description though. Too much dialogue is sorta... yeah.