Reviews for Torn Between Two: Fuji, Eiji and Tezuka's cousin
Guest chapter 23 . 8/12/2012
okay...i am really confused...who the fuck did she pick? i know it says eiji but my tiny mind cannot seem to grasp the fact that she's switching guys back and forth. i feel retarded.
shirohata chapter 21 . 6/11/2008
Huh?Nani?Nande?Pls. continue it please...

I want to know what will will happen please...
shirohata chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Is it already finish?

Huh? Please update please.

I'm begging you.
The Foolish Traveler chapter 9 . 6/7/2008
Fuji is extremely out of character. At some points I had to literally push the picture of Fuji to the front of my mind, because his character was acting nothing like him.

Tezuka is also OOC in some places, But I'll let that pass seeing as she's family.

The whole idea of her being related to a canon character is a major cliche, which can lead to some people automatically thinking that she is a Mary Sue.

Your story moves way too fast, with little detail and scenario.

Good Luck with future stories _

*Arista*
SweetSugarPuppy chapter 21 . 5/6/2008
Okay, I think that you have really good ideas. I would say that you're a creative and imaginative person. You did fine in this story!

However, I was having little issues with, first, your portrayal of Fuji, which seemed a little off-character to me. Sometimes when I read some chapters I wonder if it's Fuji I'm reading or not.

Second, as for your original character Yukiko, she seems a pretty charming girl to me, and it's fine that we'd makee a character that Fuji and Eiji will both love despite of their differences. While reading, though, she did have some Mary-Sue tendencies, and although she's not one heck of it, it was bordering dangerously in some scenarios.

Third, the story's pace was kinda fast, but more details and scenarios, plus a good sub-plot will fix the problem.

These are just my opinions on your story, but I don't claim that they are necessarily right! Of course, it's still up to you how to write since we all have our own writing styles...I hoped that helped you and didn't offend you! If I did at some point, I'm sorry about that! - I'd love to hear from you again! (But please don't hate me...I'm terribly afraid that you might...:D)

Fran
RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 21 . 2/2/2008
i remember reading this and reviewing the twoshot. go eiji for getting the girl i love both fuji and eiji like my username says.
RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 20 . 2/2/2008
i read this in ur twoshot and it was awesome go fuji for getting the girl
RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 19 . 11/30/2007
I WANNA KNOW WHO SHE WILL CHOOSE... CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
LesAlaska chapter 5 . 11/30/2007
Its an interesting story, but your not portraying fuji properly. he seems extremly out of character.
takari love chapter 19 . 11/29/2007
Oh, pls update soon...

Oh, is the next chapter Yukiko's going to tell who she choose?

I don't even dare to think how this fic might be...but both Eiji and Fuji...it's so hard to choose between them...

So, I can't to read the next chapter...and who you're going to choose for Yukiko...lol

Ja ne...
takari love chapter 17 . 11/24/2007
Oh, pls you have to update soon...,

I'm really curious of what might happen next...

ha...won't it be interesting if Fuji overheard Yukiko said Eiji was the one she had a crush on first...lol

Anyway, this is your story...,

I can't wait for your next update...,

Ja
mariku-chan12 chapter 17 . 11/20/2007
whoa 1 i still want Fuji to be with her in the end but it looks like she will end up with Eiji... hm it's soo hard to decide but thank God that you will write two endings ... but i want Fuji more... sowe Kikumaru...x( update soon...
RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 17 . 11/19/2007
this chapter was good. but the messed up part was those damn fan girls hurting her.
RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 16 . 11/18/2007
the last part tinged my heart.. aww eiji i will always love u and same goes for fuji.. even though they are not real. please update soon! _*
lupinlovesme chapter 16 . 11/18/2007
As much as i want Fuji to be with Yukiko that was sad! Poor eiji heart-broken...so sad! Still i want Fuji to be with her.
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