Reviews for Terminus
Dark Signal chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
That was so romantic! It's pretty obivous that Vakama and Nokama are made for each other, their is so much canocial details in the books and movies! (No offense to any Matua and Nokama lovers) But you got to be blind not to see that they're a great couple. I just don't get Matua and Nokama lovers.
tamiiland chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Awz. Sugary sweet. X3 Just the way I like it!
rowan417 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
ah, love, so strong it can overcome any obstacle, even trancende lifetimes.
concealedperson22 chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
Hazelstar chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Not bad, it asn't very boaring at all. Wait, there's a rule that says teammates can't love each other?
Spinderfly chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Woah. o_o

This is incredible.

I love the use of 2nd person. It's a daring perspective to write from for a fanfiction.

transformergirl1011 chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
This was really good it's the best one I've read yet. _
Zero Admin Eevee chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
... stunning.

Brilliant use of 2nd POV. For some reason, it appears to me that Vakama's inner . is narrating.

Good use of scene insertion, though unless I remember wrongly, IV, VII and XII didn't happen. (I don't know what the progression means, though.)

The ending is a simply beautiful revelation. Terminus, indeed.

Please keep writing. :)
Tollian chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
*hugs story* Aw! I love it! Who cares if it's not Halloweenish? It's great! *hugs story harder* You just made my day.:)
Sylla Shadowfrost chapter 1 . 10/31/2007
Aw, that was so sweet! I loved that, it brought all of those moments of them into one short, sweet story. Really nice. So what if it isn't halloween? WHO GIVES A DAMN, IT'A A GOOD STORY XD

I went around as a random pedestrian for halloween. I had fun. But anyway, just a question. Are you going to write that NujuSiahta story I asked? If not, it's Ok, I was just wondering. :) Loved teh story, definatly going into my favorites

Happy Halloween,

Sylla Shadowfrost