Somewhat surprised you did not have Remus and Tonks kidnap Umbridge. Given what happened — predictably — no real downside, was there? If execution too unlikely, then send her to France to be held as a prisoner.

Hahaha, very tricky of you to not have had Harry be the bad guy. Should have read on before commenting. Well played!

Great story, but Harry cheating did not ring true to me. A bit disappointing, but perhaps you wanted to add some depth or angst to the relationship?

lame i was enjoying this too. is nobody able to conceive of a human being faithful?

Henry Jones Jr, hey. I wonder what Indie would think?

nice chapter

Ty

Such a special story, definitely worth staying up late for, coffee was invented for a reason!

I seriously love the episcopal nature of this story with the occasional live scenes, it's definitely a style I'd like to try out.

The twist with Snape is also just fascinating given the build-up between Rose and Hermione, I haven't been hit that hard by words on a screen/page in quite some time.

Although I do think his rationale for doing what he does to Harry is a bit excessive, is it really a result of his mind going a bit insane or a play to up the edge in the story? As with everything I suppose its up to individual interpretation.

A/N 6 Both of Susan's parents are dead in canon. She is an orphan. She was brought up by Aunt Amelia until she was murdered and then went to live with an unnamed Uncle. It is the loss of both parents that make any children born to them orphans. Susan was probably put down for Hogwarts at birth, like Harry, making her a Legacy student

Love it

this is awesome

*muted clapping and cheering*

TROLL...MINUS. MINUS..MINUS! Yes ...TROLL vastly negative! Even JKR failed this chapter spectacularly. Any so called author who could kill off Sirius has FAILED to create a story with any merit whatsoever! Yes, I'll admit that up until this point your story was quite well done you have IRREVOCABLY lost all credibility in the entertainment aspect of this writing. This is a common flaw in even storytellers of your calibre of excellence. Please try to correct this abomination. Might I suggest that in your very next chapter you erase this egregious error by some creative license that involves a dream or the curse bouncing off leaving Sirius ALIVE AND WELL!

Love the Indiana Jones reference!

A/N2 Of course Mr. Henry Jones Jr. was born and raised in Indiana.