Reviews for Unspoken Words
twinSlayer chapter 5 . 1/14/2017
I have to let you know that your writing is great! Although these boys are tough, I do admit they have a certain charm getting tortured like that... I feel guilty. Thanks for this little ficlet!
Spinatic chapter 5 . 4/25/2014
The finish!
Spinatic chapter 4 . 4/25/2014
B-but...Goku's beautiful hair...NO!
Smexy Kitten chapter 5 . 10/30/2012
What a cruel way to end this chapter xD... I really hope that you update it sometime :)
yess91 chapter 5 . 8/9/2012
yes please do finish, i think this is really good, i really want to know what happens next
Suinderu chapter 5 . 10/5/2009
Wow this is pretty good. Maybe if you arent liking the whole no hair thing (im not so much lol) you could say it grew back pretty fast cause of Gokus is like a god but only better thing. lol. I hope you update cause it would be nice.

*gives you a coffee as a bribe :)*
ice-angel90 chapter 5 . 6/16/2009
what please dont leave it there

please write more
orvida geri chapter 5 . 4/2/2009
Wow when is the updates coming this story is great so far and i want to know what is going to happen next.
rupert maxwell chapter 4 . 1/6/2009
The error is you burnt goku-chan's hair!
artist-girl731 chapter 5 . 1/5/2009
please update soon! -
Maria chapter 5 . 11/28/2008
Please update soon! (I'm begging!)
Elegies chapter 5 . 11/13/2008
yay! anew chapter thats jus what i needed to cheer me up on this very crappy day!
Sakural7865 chapter 5 . 11/13/2008
In the end,you kinda made what they did obvious. But it was good none the less!
imperia chapter 5 . 11/13/2008
yay! i'm happy you finally updated. it isn't horrible, it definitely has room for improvement but i like it. it's cute. more soon please?
rider-of-snakes chapter 5 . 11/13/2008
Not horrible at all! I can't wait to see if the mental scarring is reversible. Keep it up!
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