|Reviews for Spirit of Snow|
| Jane Poirot chapter 7 . 11/27/2007
Do I sense a love-hate thing going on between Monkey Fist and Yuki?
| Thoughts13 chapter 6 . 11/25/2007
Nice chapter! I like it, Montykins...lol. Is Ron going to be in this fic? just wondering, cuz that seems like something that wouild happen.
| Lil-Lyon chapter 6 . 11/23/2007
I love this. TOO cute! MORE MORE MORE!
| Lil-Lyon chapter 5 . 11/19/2007
Uhmm.. YEA you have a problem, MOTNY ;] Lol.
OMG.. I LOVE THIS!
Btw, I think your English is great :]
| Thoughts13 chapter 5 . 11/19/2007
I like how he yells 'Monkey Ninja's Attack!' in the show, its really amusing, but I am really looking forward to how Monty deals with this nut.
| KP's Lawyer chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
A promising concept. Stormbound with your personal Yamanouchi-ninja. A, so it seems to me, not so insane Monkey Fist. And a pink camper...:D
Furthermore a really interessting charakter-development. I always liked a 'deeper' MF and it seems you will do more with him, than the usual "I want be the ultimate monkey master" stuff. I like that.
And Yori ranting about Ron while she should brief Yuki...yeah, I can see that happen.
And by the way...calling Drakken to unleash a storm to get rid of DNAmy...priceless. Last but not least: Flying pigs! :D
You've got me hooked.
| Lil-Lyon chapter 4 . 11/18/2007
OH WOW.. THAT WAS STUPID... I totally didn't notice the other chapters...
WELL NOW I'M EVEN MORE EXICTED!
This sounds really good! UPDATE SOON!
| Lil-Lyon chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
Hey, this is your moderator, Sarah, from RS Boards )
Great to see more MF fanfic!
| Jen Rock chapter 4 . 11/17/2007
As a huge fan of Monkey Fist, I find it sad that there aren't more fics starring him. Your fic is probably one of the best ones I've read. There's tragedy and comedy and everyone's in character. I loved Monty using the storm to drive DNAmy away and interacting with his monkey ninjas. I know it's going to end badly from the first chapter, but I look forward to the developing relationship between Monty and Yuki. It's interesting seeing him through her eyes. I added your story to my favorites and I eagerly await the future chapters.
| Thoughts13 chapter 4 . 11/15/2007
That was seamless, and I did get that the end was keeping in with the timeline presented at the begenning of the fic, so yeah, you mentioned that in your authrous note, so I thought I'd give it a mention. I'd like to see what book he's reading but guess that'll have to wait
| Thoughts13 chapter 3 . 11/11/2007
Hey, I really like this, you're epilogue was really shocking so I'd love to see what happened before that. Awesome fic.
| Jane Poirot chapter 3 . 11/10/2007
This is beginning to look more and more promising...wonder if this is going to be a 'Monkey Fist/Yuki' romance?
| Jane Poirot chapter 2 . 11/5/2007
Funny you should type that, because here I am, giving you a review that you have the option of replying to! Yes, I am reading this, and it's very good so far and the title is rather clever. Monkey Fist reflecting on his previous attempts to get DNAmy to leave him alone is hilarious!
| DJ Dubois chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
For a first story, this is a nice beginning. I'd like to know more about Yuki myself (not to mention how she was involved in Monkey Fist).
I also liked how you had certain characters confront the consequences of their actions (Monkey Fist and Sensei). I hope you continue this piece.
BTW-your English is okay other than a few misspellings here and there.
Keep up the good work.