|Reviews for Moments|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Awesome job this was sooo cute the best konosetsu iv'e read
| OfSunsetsandCarcrashes chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
This was amazing. I loved it. I'm glad Setsuna finally found the courage she needed to go after her heart. They deserve happiness, and Konoka brings Setsuna all the happiness she needs. Great story :)
| kyuubigunslinger14 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
aw this story was adorable! uwah! kudos! 5/5
| Dana Kishimoto chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
The last part was totally funny (laughs)
I totally forgot about the picture!
Try to work on your spelling a bit more...
Anyways keep it up! (tgumbs up)
| taylor chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
OMG!That story made me cry tears of pain and tears of story was so thing that made me upset when the story came to the end was that you didnt put a part when konoka-san-nee-sama-chan (my extreemly long nickname) and setsuna-san-nee-sama-chan got maybe next time way loved the story maybe you can do some other ones of my favourite hear there opinion.
Mana:Yes Cooper-sama?(pops out of nowhere with guns in her hands)
Chisame:What do you want fatty!
Taylor:Hey im not fat im just big boned!
Taylor:And guys you no i dont like it when you call me by my last name.
Taylor:Any way i called you here so you can voice your opinion..how would you like it if the author decides to do a yuri story of if the aurthors trying to think of another story.
Chisame:NO WAY!im not going to be shown as a lesbian on the internet.
Zazie: ... :)...
Taylor:I see you want to be paired up with chisame.
Zazie: ... -_*
Chisame:Noo way im going out with this not in love with her.
Taylor:thats not what your diary told me last said zmzm hm.
Chisame:(covers taylors mouth)
Haruna:(pops out of nowhere)I smell a strong sence of love over the way to zazie and chasime-chan
Chisame:got lost you 's are all freaks im going(dissaperes into thin air)
Taylor:so kaede what do you think if the author desides to put you and mana together.
Kaede:ah sorry taylor-bozu got to go -_-(fades away)
Mana:(cell phone starts ringing)Wosh sorry got to run to.(runs away)
Taylor:Hmm maybe kuu and chao should be writen together as a yuri.
Kuu:Yay yuri . whats yuri?
chao:dont ever ask that again.(gives a note to taylor)
Taylor:(reads note in head)
Note:PLEASE OH PLEASE SOME ONE WRITE US TOGETHER!
Zazie:(Holds up sighn)
Sighn:Sorry for taylors long review she has been doing that latly since she's getting inpatiant to find a yuri story of negima that isnt about konoka and also like to find a negima yuri story about evangaline and she hasnt actually looked for it yet thanks for your time for reading this review . HA!review more like we bid you good day.
Taylor:Hay zazie its just you and me tonight wanna watch a me. :)
Zazie:Looks like i can speak now that everyones taylor why not.
Taylor:Would you like to sleep over aswell.
Haruna:how sweet you two girls are getting together too.
Taylor:(grabbs zazies hand and run from haruna)
Haruna:How romantic 1st konoka-san and taylor-sama and zazie-nee-chan
| dylan shinichiro yuki chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
i liked youre story dude can you make a story about a giy and konoka ?
| markesellus chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Aww so cute. Some typos but that is to be expected. I like how she never got the picture back. I completely forgot about it. ;
| DreamShadower chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Overall that was a very nice and fluffy ff. The topic flow was good, and you stayed in character nicely. Though you do need to work on your spelling, and seperate the really big chunks of text. Or when someone else starts to speak. Though this was still a great story. 3
You did a nice job combiningfluff/angst/humor all at once though. It looks like Makie needs protection from Setsuna for asking such embaressing questions. XD
Ah, the picture was a nice touch, and with how Setsuna never got it back .;
| WolfGaurdian888 chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
O.O *glomps* omg! i loved that story! that was soo good! you have to make a sequel!
| masu1212 chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
great fic! um...im not sure but maybe ur trying to say outfit
either way it still a good fic
| pigtopus chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
Wow, this is a super fantastic FF. It's just kind of lengthy. But it was still great! The part at the arcade was SO CUTE! And then everything changed after that kiss. Super sad. At least it's a happy ending (: Write more FF!
| Kailor Aurelius chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
That story was amazing! I loved the way you mentioned the part about Setsuna not getting the picture back! I'd completely forgotten! Thanks for an awesome read! Keep it up!
| Samuraixz chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
ok dude i have to say that u really need to work on your writing considering that in every single sentence there was a spelling mistake or either a grammer mistake
also dude your 14 and you don't even know how to spell "usual" right
but all in all a nice story
| Yukimura Akira chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
Hm... Spotted a number of typing errors here and there. But considering the time that you wrote it, it's pretty much understandable. Even so, I suggest you get a proof-reader or do a proper spell check before posting your stories next time.
Oh, and also, some paragraphs are pretty difficult to read because it's like I'm reading a whole chunk of text and suddenly, I get lost in the middle of it. And umm, I think you should try to start a new paragraph when the other person starts to speak, because it gets really confusing after a while.
Actually, the story is pretty good, save the spelling errors and paragraphing stuff. On the whole, it's pretty fluffy and I liked it xD By the way, I loved Makie's questions, especially the second one. Hilarious, really. Looking forward to more fan fics from you! (I would totally appreciate it if you would edit this and repost it D)
| Nonori chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
You have a few typos you really need to fix:
"Why don't you guys make it offeshal and go steady already?"
A simple spell check would have caught that; also who says go steady? That's like what my grandparents called it, just say go out or something like that. There are a few other glaring typos, but I won't bother with them.
You need to separate into paragraphs when a different person begins to speak, it's confusing and annoying to read.
Other than the numerous typographical and occasional grammatical errors, it's not a bad read. Cute and fluffy mostly.