Reviews for Bloodline
Thwelastlotus chapter 1 . 7/1
First off update! I hate getting into good story's and then they just stop and why are all these chapters so creeping short
NH chapter 16 . 5/23
Your story is good so far continue it I was getting into it don't stop make Hinata be trained by the two best medical Ninja one of them the Tsunade she can be the best top medical Ninja and the top fighter Ninja with Naruto by her side hey if Naruto gets to summon Jutsu why not Hinata summoning Jutsu I was thinking about Raven or maybe tigers cute little foxes she'll be thinking of Naruto make them strong Naruto and Hinata and yes it would be very nice if Naruto's parents Minato and Kushina is alive soon if you like any of my ideas I like giving them continue writing and I'll read them I don't know if you want to make Sasuke good or evil that is your decision but if you give my opinion I would go with good Naruto Hinata Sasuke can be the top three with the best summoning Jutsu no snake he can do wolves or other animals well I better go I don't want to give all my ideas to you right now or other writers that write stories I like writing my own stories and helping others but there's and I like others help me back PS if Naruto help Sasuke with his training no Revenge it has to be Sasuke knows the truth about his clan that when not me his brother it would be black shadow man sorry I just don't know his name right now but I know what he looks like in the animated show
NH chapter 16 . 5/22
All keep writing your story was getting pretty good. Keep Naruto together with Hinata and yes help Naruto's parents come back to life he will be very happy. I don't know if Sasuke should turn good and it would be real good for Hinata to be trained by the high medical Ninja Shining not Sakura or she can train both of them but Hinata more powerful. So Naruto and Hinata can be powerful together and Save their friends and family from enemy hands.

Those are just my ideas that can help you write more and your story

You keep writing and I'll read them

Love it so far very very good

Naruto and Hinata rules rules yeah yeah xo xo xo
cespericueta35 chapter 16 . 2/10
finish this
dagondawn chapter 16 . 10/30/2016
only one question? when are you going to update!
Narutofanninja2 chapter 16 . 9/26/2016
This hasn't been updated in years and I really liked it!
Currahee506 chapter 16 . 8/1/2016
Update please
Valle95 chapter 16 . 7/24/2016
Hello I was wondering if you were planning to update this story anytime soon seeing as it has been almost six years since you last updated.
Benja 9000 chapter 16 . 7/13/2016
i like it
dmafia ruler chapter 16 . 6/10/2016
Sterben-Salamander chapter 8 . 3/20/2016
no to 1 2 and 3 yes to 4 and 5 in the final exam and when his clan gets there.
padamrb7 chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
good story loved it but please update
Narudre chapter 8 . 11/15/2015
You gotta improve on your spellings.
Guest chapter 16 . 7/29/2015
Please update soon
Kloud0278 chapter 16 . 7/21/2015
HEyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy continue the damn story already
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