|Reviews for First steps|
| Coalesced chapter 12 . 3/16/2010
Hm... did Edward propose the double date? Hah, JEALOUSLY!
| nicole chapter 12 . 2/22/2010
plese update son,love the story
| twilight rules xx chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
hey are jake and bella really family or just really close friends that they consider themselfs family?
| CCC chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
I 3 THIS STORY!
| I-Am-A-KLuTZ chapter 12 . 7/7/2009
Great chap! Luv ur story! Please update! I wana know what happens to Bella when Edward is there!
| neverendingdreams-127 chapter 12 . 4/5/2009
| neverendingdreams-127 chapter 2 . 4/4/2009
NO! please continue the story
| daffy410 chapter 12 . 3/1/2009
interesting story, looking forward to your next chapter. thanks.
| PiecesOfSerendipity chapter 12 . 2/19/2009
omg its but what, a YEAR? since you updated! In the authors note it says you will try reli hard for tomorrow. I guess it took 364 days longer than expected.
Lov the story and i think your a good writer. I love how Mike is just being used - this bella rox and how every boy is drooling othr bella xD
Update soon or ill kel you.
| inactive-account-09 chapter 12 . 1/5/2009
| Magic Carpet Bitch chapter 12 . 12/31/2008
pretty funky story !
| TheDay'sEye chapter 12 . 12/15/2008
| Azrael Hadesdaughter chapter 8 . 11/5/2008
love the story!
| whoa.oh.twilight chapter 12 . 7/2/2008
GREAT STORY! PLEZ UPDATE! plez...with edward on top!
| australianvamp chapter 12 . 6/21/2008
update right now... this story is HILARIOUS