Reviews for What did Hinata just do!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/9
O_O O.O a 3 gallon sake bottle (sweatdrop)
Guest chapter 4 . 7/29
It was good put I think you could add a threesome
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13
Well, what the literal fuck
Guest chapter 16 . 6/23
good bye and live long and prosper you should thing about weighting erotic novels
Guest chapter 8 . 6/23
lol
Parks98 chapter 2 . 3/22
Sakura hate in the world
Parks98 chapter 1 . 3/22
...the funny thing is I can actually imagine this happening
Sky chapter 16 . 3/6
Why are u giving up the story?
Sabineezra chapter 7 . 2/28
I really would like it if you let hinata be a little more like she really is. I mean the pervert side or her is funny but when you mentioned that she masturbates I was kinda thrown off but I still read the story. Just make her a little more like she really is and leave a little bit of her pervert side. Also have it to where jiraiya doesn't tell tsunade but gives her like really hard hints to where she is researching like all day with her little assistant (whatever her name is, sry my mind is running a blank, I practically know everyone on the show because I watch it so much!) and they finally find out together. The both get little nose bleeds but barely like just a Trekell. After that she calls naruto and hinata in to do a mission together but what she really wants is to see if they can focus on the mission and not do anything naughty. Lol. Well when they do she makes her assistant leave the room and she masturbates to watching them through the crystal ball. Well jiraiya was peeking and caught her in the act. After she masturbates she says aloud" now once they come back I'll have to break them up and make sure they can't go on any missions together" but once jiraiya hears that he hops in the room through the window and is all like "oh I don't think so cause if you do I'll tell everyone you masturbated to them having sex" (not in those exact words just, you know...um...hmm..you get what I mean!) and she has to keep her mouth shut. To make sure she doesn't kill him though he says he will have a talk with naruto and she will have a talk with hinata to make sure they don't do that on missions anymore. Thx I hope you put this into consideration. I see you have already posted the next chapters but I wanted to give you my idea so I did. THX. hope the story goes well with ya. P.s. You could be a professional book writer like just not as perverty. Hope you take that as a compliment it's not an insult.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
awesome!
Guest chapter 16 . 12/19/2014
cool story
Guest chapter 16 . 11/19/2014
i hate you nigga i want more
Rob-b-hood chapter 3 . 10/26/2014
I'm reading this story again. LOL. It is the first fanfic story I read. And it was how I started reading fanfic stories. Great work, sad that u r not writing anymore Anyway guy luck in ur life bro
Guest chapter 15 . 10/1/2014
Continue!
Guest chapter 4 . 9/14/2014
Good job
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