Very well done. I applaud thee.

Bravo! Bravo! Absolutely fabulous job! It was just the right amount of fluffy moments, humorous moments, tearjerking moments, and wrench throwing moments. I especially loved the milk thing at the end. It was almost too funny considering the seriousness of the last scene, but you pulled it off very well. I'm sure I'm not the only one who hoped it was something romantic-ish, but knew that Winry wouldn't really give something girlfriend-esque to Ed.

I completely agree, by the way, that WinryxEd is the best pairing ever, and this embodied their relationship perfectly. I'm going to hold you to more of these oneshots, because this was excellent.

Hoping for another one soon,

LK

This was really great: it summed up their relationship about perfectly. I loved Winry's "present" so much, and I loved how the story managed to be funny, sweet, and sad at the same time.

You should definitely make a series of FMA oneshots; I would certianly read them. I know this is a bit presumptuous, considering that you didn't really ask for requests, but could you write a Roy/Riza oneshot too? They're up there on my favorite FMA pairings list with Ed/Winry, and I haven't read any truly good ones, but I have faith that you could produce one.

This was really great: it summed up their relationship about perfectly. I loved Winry's "present" so much, and I loved how the story managed to be funny, sweet, and sad at the same time.

You should definitely make a series of FMA oneshots; I would certianly read them. I know this is a bit presumptuous, considering that you didn't really ask for requests, but could you write a Roy/Riza oneshot too? They're up there on my favorite FMA pairings list with Ed/Winry, and I haven't read any truly good ones, but I have faith that you could produce one.

Great oneshot ! I really liked it. The characters were all... well, in character, wiht the right amount of angst and humor, and I just love the idea of Winry giving Ed a bottle of milk ! I hope you'll write more soon :)