|Reviews for Hearts of Darkness First Draft|
| Timeflies chapter 4 . 11/8/2007
She won her spot and now will take on this task superivsing these men. Wonder if any are jealous of her leadership? More please.
| Timeflies chapter 3 . 11/8/2007
Me thinks Raoul is playing two ends against the middle. Reading on.
| Timeflies chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Different take on our familiar story. Reading on.
| fcol chapter 4 . 11/7/2007
I'm definitely interested so far! This may have been written in a hurry but your writing style is smooth and profesional enough that I don't think I would have known if you hadn't mentioned it! The setting is so different than what we are used to in this fandom that I am intrigued as to how you are going to incorporate elements of the original story into the adventure about to begin. I look forward to reading more of this!
| liVe-yOur-fAntasY chapter 3 . 11/6/2007
great story! update soon please!
| Lost-Blue-Phantom chapter 3 . 11/4/2007
Christine reminds me of this one time where I was at a swim meet, and my coaches had taken me out of this event, and then they put me in at the very last second.
On the other hand, interesting story and I cannot wait to see where you go with this.
| Momo chapter 2 . 11/3/2007
Very interesting, continue.
| Kaya Nah chapter 2 . 11/3/2007
Interesting beginning...when do we get more? :D
Keep it up!
| truemornings chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
This is one of the most creative stories of PotO I've read, please continue!
| Cadoiscool chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
great storyline! cant wait for the rest of it!